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Title: A Plan in Action 24 Jan 2024 8:12 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    I love how Severus dealt with Dudley. Harry is right it's not nice but great fun and what they deserve. 



    Author's Response:

    It was fun. I'm sorta sad to have ended that bit. 

Title: A Plan in Action 23 Jan 2024 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Esperanzarebelde (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that the Dudleys and their parents are getting something they deserve to suffer for everything they made Harry suffer, although I feel like it's still not enough

    Author's Response:

    It probably isn't enough, tbh. But Snape hasn't exactly been kind to Harry either. What I hope comes across in this fic, by the end, is that different people respond to things differently. And, that its possible to condem the actions of people without condeming people. 

Title: A Plan in Action 23 Jan 2024 8:37 pm
Reviewer: Esperanzarebelde (Signed) [Report This]
    "The stupid boy acted like this was just how the world was supposed to work."
    I can't help but roll my eyes at that thought from Sev, clearly Harry acts like that, so he knows that's how it's always been and that's how it will continue to

    Author's Response:

    Snape can be a little slow on the uptake sometimes. Especially, if what he sees contradicts his world view. 

Title: A Plan in Action 23 Jan 2024 5:05 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is tender hearted. I would agree on upping the rating…

    Author's Response:

    Harry is such a sweet kid! He's a bit clueless at times, but, yes, tender hearted is the perfect way of saying it. 

Title: A Plan in Action 23 Jan 2024 3:23 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, I'm enjoying the story but I believe you need to up the rating if you're going to use f-bombs so frequently. It's a bit much. One sentence especially is too, too much... Besides that, it refers back to Lily and Petunia's mom and I don't think Snape had any the ng against her.

    Author's Response:

    I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! I did consider uping the rating after reading your comment, and talked to a couple other authors about it, as well. However, considering that the language is the only thing that might push it up I'm going to leave it as is for now. I promise I did take your suggestion seriously. And, I can assure you there's not another comment like the one you're referring to. 



    Author's Response:

    I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! I did consider uping the rating after reading your comment, and talked to a couple other authors about it, as well. However, considering that the language is the only thing that might push it up I'm going to leave it as is for now. I promise I did take your suggestion seriously. And, I can assure you there's not another comment like the one you're referring to. 


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