Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Acceptance
Title: A Plan in Action 23 Jan 2024 8:37 pm
Reviewer: Esperanzarebelde (Signed) [Report This]
    "The stupid boy acted like this was just how the world was supposed to work."
    I can't help but roll my eyes at that thought from Sev, clearly Harry acts like that, so he knows that's how it's always been and that's how it will continue to

    Author's Response:

    Snape can be a little slow on the uptake sometimes. Especially, if what he sees contradicts his world view. 

Title: Switching Places 23 Jan 2024 8:27 pm
Reviewer: Esperanzarebelde (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, he's never really had any toys of his own that I remember before this, the image of him sleeping with the snitch is funny though.

    Author's Response:

    Poor kid and his lack of toys. And, I'm glad the image of him sleeping with the snitch is humorous! Some of these chapters are getting a little bit angsty, but I tried to work in humor where I could! 

Title: A Plan in Action 23 Jan 2024 5:05 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is tender hearted. I would agree on upping the rating…

    Author's Response:

    Harry is such a sweet kid! He's a bit clueless at times, but, yes, tender hearted is the perfect way of saying it. 

Title: Switching Places 23 Jan 2024 4:53 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is so perceptive, with both Petunia and Harry. I’m loving this!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you! 

Title: A Warm Dursley Welcome 23 Jan 2024 4:44 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    How Snape and Petunia are relating is such an interesting dynamic. I liked the cassette reference - so old school!

    Author's Response:

    Very old school... oh the memories... 

    I really had fun exploring their dynamic in this fic! They're surprisingly alike and it's not hard to imagine them with an almost sibling like relationship. Yet, they can't stand each other. It's been a delight to write it.

Title: The Shrewdness of Minerva McGonagall 23 Jan 2024 2:04 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the chapter titles! I hope we learn more about McGonagall’s secret.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you noticed the titles, and are enjoying them! Thank you! 

Title: Going Back 23 Jan 2024 2:00 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so good!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! 

Title: A Plan in Action 23 Jan 2024 3:23 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, I'm enjoying the story but I believe you need to up the rating if you're going to use f-bombs so frequently. It's a bit much. One sentence especially is too, too much... Besides that, it refers back to Lily and Petunia's mom and I don't think Snape had any the ng against her.

    Author's Response:

    I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! I did consider uping the rating after reading your comment, and talked to a couple other authors about it, as well. However, considering that the language is the only thing that might push it up I'm going to leave it as is for now. I promise I did take your suggestion seriously. And, I can assure you there's not another comment like the one you're referring to. 



    Author's Response:

    I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! I did consider uping the rating after reading your comment, and talked to a couple other authors about it, as well. However, considering that the language is the only thing that might push it up I'm going to leave it as is for now. I promise I did take your suggestion seriously. And, I can assure you there's not another comment like the one you're referring to. 

Title: The Steadfastness of Pomona Sprout 23 Jan 2024 2:56 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked both conversations — Sprout was sweet and Flitwick was insightful. They were both so supportive in their own ways.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed both conversations! I wanted to show their differences and how Snape responded to them. Thank you!

Title: The Sagacity of Filius Flitwick 23 Jan 2024 2:50 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was fun! I hope Severus and Harry give this a chance.

    Author's Response:

    They have some adjusting to do that's for sure! 


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