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Reviews For Acid Reigns
Lovelychapter thank you. I love the back story about Eileen great fun.
I feel so bad for failing to review the last two chapter! I'm so sorry! That's what happens when I read on my phone, and tell myself I go back later when I'm on my computer to review. Needless to say, I FUCKING LOVE THIS WHOLE STORY. Please, never stop writing. When I read the scene in the last chapter about the homeless man Harry stepped on, I was really curious to see if he would be making an appearance again. For some reason I thought he might be Tobias Snape. idk why. Will we see him agian? Am I reading too much into that scene? I love that Snape collected the pieces of the bell! I'm hoping he fixes it for Snowdrop. It was clearly very special to her, and I need to know all the things. Harry being kinda rude to Nick because he was focused on Snape, and then regretting it is so perfectly in character and relateable. It was beautiful. Also, Harry and Snape talking about Harry's 'helping' Snape was so perfect! *chef's kiss* Then there was all the revelations about Snape and his mum. And Snape's sulkiness.... omg I love this story. LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE this story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing Author's Response: Don't feel bad, it's ok! I love hearing from you! As for the tramp...? All I can say is... er... um... *winky face* lol Much more about Snowdrop and Nicky is forthcoming (I hope readers don't mind the OCs but they literally took on a life of their own, without my say so).
Author's Response: Thanks! There's a lot more backstory where that came from!
Author's Response: Yep! It's the lapel pin! I had quite a few reviews ask what he was doing there, and I went back to see when Snape addresses that to Harry, and it's not until chapter 10, so I wasn't quite sure whether to answer it or not in responses
Wonderful scene, but why was Severus there in the first place? I remember when a parent pointed out we had an almond tree in the playground and although it had never had any nuts on it, it had to be taken down as we had children who had nut allergies! Thank you for your update Author's Response: Wow! That's impressive. I'm not sure I'd even recognize an almond tree by sight, even if I had a child who was allergic. I guess it wouldn't have occurred to me to check nearby trees. I checked to see where I explain his presence, and I do in chapter ten, but it was the lapel pin that alerted him to Harry's distress.
Author's Response: Super Snape to the rescue!
I loved Snape's response to Harry becoming involved in a fight, if only while trying to stop it. Author's Response: Thank you! I feel as though this is probably the sort of advice he gives to his Slytherins. "Fight back, but don't let me catch you doing it."
Author's Response: I sincerely enjoy writing a younger Snape! I'm so happy you're enjoying him as much as I enjoyed writing him! (Sorry for not responding earlier. I had no clue I was able to respond to comments on P&S lol)
Wonderful, I love their sarky comments and interchanges thank you Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll forgive me for not responding earlier, I didn't know I had the ability on this platform lol I very very much appreciate all of your feedback, going back to G&L <3
Wonderful description of mayhem in a playground! I love how your using dialect thank you so much |
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