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Reviews For Acid Reigns
Nice chapter although with a not so nice topic. I hope something will work out for Severus jobwise because the pressure of not having enough money is just so bad :( I liked Harry's and Severus' interaction, Severus being all sweet and shy about sharing his money problems with Harry because he feels responsible to provide for Harry. Very sweet. And then Harry who's determined to stand by Severus and find a solution with him. Also very sweet! :)
Thank you a very entertaining chapter, I loved the circus discussion.
Another great chapter! I'm really looking forward to how their relationship will grow :) Also as someone with impossible hair myself I really enjoyed their little banter about it.
I loved it! I liked your characterisation of Dumbledore and how Severus and Harry both stood up to him. As a reader this really gives you a feeling for the developing relationship between these two. And I simply adored your Severus beeing so protective of Harry like sending him to the kitchen to get the milk or giving him this one side glance before he said that the Dursleys abandoned him. It's so good! Thank you :) |
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