It feels realistic that Draco would still have some deeply held prejudices. I like the veritaserum! It should have been used in canon…sigh. Thanks for posting the new chapter here before it hit AO3 (at least I think it did)! And big thanks for your terrific story. I’m looking forward to seeing what happens!
This was a lovely chapter with a mix of new and familiar happenings.
What a great twist on a familiar scene!
Oh no, reading that book isn’t going to lead anywhere good. It’s nice to see Harry recognize just how much stress Severus is under.
Whew, that was quite a scare. I like how Harry’s been trying to be there Draco, even if his efforts aren’t always appreciated (or germane to Slytherin norms).
Awesome chapter! The conversations were so well written.
| Title: The Department of Magical Law Enforcement
| 22 Apr 2024 6:03 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This was a wonderfully angsty chapter. I was disappointed by Severus’s response, but happily surprised by Dumbledore’s help.
| Title: The Trial of Lucius Malfoy
| 22 Apr 2024 5:43 pm
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Oh yes, Moody and his rare abilities. Good detail there! I can understand Snape wanting to protect Draco from that.
Draco is being insufferable. I can understand why, but I’m glad that Snape is being firm about drawing boundaries. They’re going to be in soooo much trouble!
I really like that they finally addressed this.
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