Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 6 21 Mar 2006 5:32 am
Reviewer: bella eiram (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter

    Author's Response: thanks!
Title: Chapter 5 21 Mar 2006 5:24 am
Reviewer: bella eiram (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful

    Author's Response: :D  thank you!
Title: Chapter 4 21 Mar 2006 5:17 am
Reviewer: bella eiram (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, I am sure I have read this story somewhere before.  Now I'm so currious as to know which site you have posted it on.  Very good chapter.

    Author's Response: Yep, I also post on ff.net, and I've just registered for an account at a new site, Haven of Dreamers.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3 21 Mar 2006 5:03 am
Reviewer: bella eiram (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks again!  :)
Title: Chapter 2 21 Mar 2006 4:59 am
Reviewer: bella eiram (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 21 Mar 2006 4:56 am
Reviewer: bella eiram (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel that I have read this story before.  Perhaps on ff.net.  I am unsure if you are on that site or not.  Anyways, wonderful chapter.

    Author's Response: Yes, I do post on ff.net.  You may have seen it there.  Thanks very much for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 15 21 Jan 2006 8:07 am
Reviewer: Feye_Morgan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh....wow. A very breathy 'wow'. I must say that I was so incredibly swept up in this beautifully written story that when the end came, I wasn't expecting it, and a aching akin to pain appeared, wanting to see what's going to happen once they arrive back at school.

    This has to be one of THE best Harry-lives-with-Snape-over-the-summer stories I've read, and there are a LOT of those. In fact, this rates as probably one of the three best Snape and Harry stories I've read, period. You nailed the personalities down PERFECTLY. You didn't over-dramatize the Dursleys' treatment of Harry (something that most authors seem to feel a need to do), and took enough time and just the right steps to bring Harry and Snape to an understanding and, dare I say it, liking of one another. You didn't move too fast, you didn't make Snape too open or 'gushy', and Harry was perfectly and absolutely Harry. It takes a rare and skilled author to be able to do what you just did, and as well as you just did it. Thank you for such a wonderful read.

    Author's Response: Oh, oh my.  I...don't quite know what to say, other than THANK YOU!!!!!!  Wow.  I am so incredibly pleased that you liked this story.  Your review really just made my week.  Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 15 14 Jan 2006 7:46 am
Reviewer: Vanaondoiel (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow!!!!

    That was such a great story!!  I loved the conflict that Severus seemed to have with himself.  This kept him very in character, and Harry was very in character as well, teenage mood swings and all :D

    Great job!  

    Blessings,

    Vana 



    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it.  It was difficult at times to keep everyone acting appropriately while still moving forward.  There are a few points that I think I missed, but I am glad that it is still enjoyable.
Title: Chapter 15 30 Dec 2005 12:59 am
Reviewer: maya (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i just read the whole thing and i wanted to let you know that i enjoyed every second. the chapers were neither to long nor too short. it was always interesting but not packed and frankly i don't know what else to say but congratz for a job well done and  that i hope  that you will continue writing

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I do plan to keep writing, and, (shameless self-promo) I have actually begun the sequel to this tale.  Thank you again!
Title: Chapter 15 11 Dec 2005 7:21 am
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a really great story, one of my favorites.  And I'm picky.

    Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked it!

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