i think that draco and harry shouldnt call ppl babys -glares-
I cried...
Anywho...3:40 am after haveing three cups of sugar cream and coffee ( mommy deadest says i use too much sugar and creamer to call it coffee) it always the best time to A) read or watch a movie b) work.
| Title: Never 'Told' the Truth
| 04 Apr 2008 12:26 am
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| Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Anonymous)
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Short and sweet? few spelling mistakes for which there is no excuse in a short dit like this. But overall i liked it. Especially the end. How did Harry know that Snape was his father? Don't you think that given Harry's personality he wouldn't have been able to keep it to himself or stop it affecting the way in which he interacted with Snape? If Snape was his father wouldn't Harry look like him and not James Potter? moreover don't you think Snape would have swung more violently between abhorring Harry to his face and bursting with unexpected affection for him at least in feeling if not openly? That would have been quite funny to read,Snape wrestling with his conflicting feelings, and confusing Harry even more or supposing he knew somehow (I would guess that Dumbledore had been meddling?) that that would encourage or frightening him?
Oh the possiblities. What if Harry didn't die but came back like in deathly Hallows, what would happen next, the dynamic's changed completely, they could never go back to the same state. oh that could be interesting, sequel? :)
Okay, I know I've reviewed this already, but I just had to review again. This is like, the BEST! It's beautiful, and sad, and it didn't help my emotions very much that I'm also listening to a sad Russian song (Valeria and Stas Pieha, 'Rasstavanie', check it out, it's beautiful. But anyway...)
I love those last few sentences, the 'he never saw, felt, heard, etc.' Those just wrench my heart right out of my chest. And the 'He knew. All along... he knew... Oh God Albus..." SO SAD!
I love this line:
'Never saw them have to pry him from his father's fingers'
I could see that in my mind, very nice.
Oh, man, now I'm crying! Why do you do this to me????!!!
(lol.)
Love it, hope to see more stories from you soon?
-Elise
Author's Response: Welcome back! *smile* It's always nice to see a returning face. Even if it is just in their words. *grin* I'm pleased you enjoyed it so much to give it a second go. I've been working on bits and pieces of stories, but as their scattered between two different computers it's slow going with rare updates. (sorry) But I am trying. In fact, if you want to know, I started another Sevitus fic called 'Brandon Nightshade' that hasn't even been posted on FF.Net. If you're interested, most of my fics are posted on FF.Net under the pen name: GoddessMoonLady. Thanks for coming back!
OH, I'm gonna cry! That was wonderrful, but oh! so sad! I loved it, and now I can't see to type! Beautiful gorgeous marvelous! Thank you!
-Elise
Author's Response: *chuckles* I completely understand what you mean. I kept breaking down in tears myself while writting this. (which is what I blaimed all the original typos on *wink*) Than you for reading!
| Title: Never 'Told' the Truth
| 26 Aug 2007 6:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhea (Signed)
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Not bad...really. But tooo short..))
| Title: Never 'Told' the Truth
| 10 Apr 2007 7:08 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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-sniff- Will you write a severitus chalage- a spin off of this maby?
| Title: Never 'Told' the Truth
| 02 Jan 2007 2:32 am
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| Reviewer: Thornstar (Anonymous)
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That was so sad, but I loved it! Very well written...
| Title: Never 'Told' the Truth
| 15 Jul 2006 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: Crappy story (Anonymous)
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This is a CRAPPY STORY CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Look pall, I'll tell you like I tell every one else: IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT THEN DON'T READ IT! I DIDN'T THREATEN YOU AT WAND POINT AND MAKE YOU READ IT SO DON'T GO TAKING YOUR ISSUES OUT ON MY STORY!! IF YOU CAN'T SAY SOMETHING NICE THEN GO JUMP OFF A CLIFF!! *innocent smile* *content sigh*
| Title: Never 'Told' the Truth
| 30 Jun 2006 5:47 am
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| Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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good one shot
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Never 'Told' the Truth
| 30 Jun 2006 5:46 am
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| Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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