I think Harry's in a bit of trouble...:D
sounds like a lovely day. not. good chapter. waiting for more. :D
That was good. really, the note and mother thing. I liked a lot. ;)
So will Hary give them a chance? hm, I like the spell idea...
| Title: Six
| 21 Feb 2005 5:03 am
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| Reviewer: Gray Darken (Anonymous)
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Awww... So cute! Its funny... Youre image of Harry seems to have changed. At first, when he came to Severus as Faucon, he was sarcastic and a little dark.. but now he seems just scared and I suppose "regular" again, and not angry at anyone really... Was this intentional, or just the progression of your writing? Thanks! ^o^
| Title: Six
| 20 Feb 2005 9:35 am
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| Reviewer: me (Anonymous)
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Hey, This story is excellent! I started out at Mugglenet but when they didn't have anymore, I tracked down every site that had this story 'til I found TWO more chapters of it! I was delighted to say the least. Please post more as soon as possible... I'm going going to faint with anticipation! This is one of the best ff's I've come across (and I've read A LOT of them!) so I hope you plan on continuing your terrific work. There are only a few minor spelling errors scattered about the whole thing. Thanks for the wonderful read.
very very sweet. Poor Harry. How much he has to go through. yup it was time to breakdown. waiting for more. :D
awww. That would be a shock to find someone believed in you when you thought they didn't. Good chapter. :D
Really good. Hope there is more soon!!
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