What, is that it? No, 1000 points from Griffydor? No, Snape using magic to make the snow land on Harry's head?
Also, I thought that Harry didn't like any winter games due his abuse from the Dursleys. Would Dudley and the other bullies pelted him with snowball or something similar?
Hehe! Nice! I don't know why this is rated so low on frogs--I think it's pretty good and it leaves you wondering about Harry's fate.
Nice work!
-P.G.
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| 31 Jul 2006 7:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Andy (Anonymous)
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Oh Please write more. It was such a good start but it would be so funny to see a full grown spy wizard take on Potter's crew.
I really would like to know what Snape would do to Harry... detention for a week or many lost points probably. If Snape got sick even worse. Perhaps you should consider writing another chapter or a small sequel?
Author's Response: :) I'll think it over since it sounds like a good idea. Summer's here and soon I'll have tons of down time at work to write since it'll be like working in a oven for the next few months.
Ah! Nice. Poor Snape just going about his business collecting his needed leaves and he gets whammed. I'm curious to know what Snape will do in retaliation but I guess that that is all there is.. I bet he'll be in a bad mood for the rest of the day. :)
Author's Response: Hehe! In a bad mood for the next week is more like him! :)
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