Title: Forever My Baby
| 14 Nov 2016 10:01 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it thank you especially the cupcake scene
Title: Forever My Baby
| 05 Aug 2009 8:08 am
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Reviewer: Candace (Anonymous)
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Title: Forever My Baby
| 05 Aug 2009 8:04 am
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Reviewer: Sami (Anonymous)
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Love your take on James as step-daddy. Hagrid sounds like he does in the movies too. I'm gonna read this over again because i love it so much!
Hee! I love this! I do believe this is the first story I've come across in which James, Sirius, and Severus cooperate. It was utterly enjoyable and strangely believable! ~Frosty
Title: Forever My Baby
| 03 Mar 2007 12:24 pm
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Reviewer: Severus Snape (Anonymous)
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How nice of you to label the flashbacks in your story, as I would have never guessed that's what they were. Most authors chose to write them seamlessly into their stories, rather than randomly plunk them in.
Title: Forever My Baby
| 17 Dec 2006 7:32 am
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Reviewer: mindovermadness (Anonymous)
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That is so cute!!! I hope you continue it soon.
Title: Forever My Baby
| 07 Jul 2006 6:37 am
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Reviewer: WolfDragonDemon (Anonymous)
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I like it it's really good. I don't know if you'll continue this or not but the story wounds like your not and plus, you never know.
Title: Forever My Baby
| 27 Apr 2006 2:11 am
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Reviewer: patho (Anonymous)
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i just thought i would let u know Sirius middle name is Oroirn (like the star,im not sure if i spelt it right but it from Ororins belt the constalation)
Title: Forever My Baby
| 26 Jun 2005 9:22 am
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Reviewer: Rhiamon Synclair (Anonymous)
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This was such an endearing tale!! I love Daddy!Severus. Severus is such a wonderful character with such depth of personality. You portrayed him very well, exactly as I would expect him to behave with a young son. Unless you truly meant this just to be a one-shot, I would recommend continuing. Well, I would humbly request that you continue. Again, a very well-written piece. I commend you.
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