good start so far! You could have made the dream more detailed perhaps?I was a bit confused at first as to wots happening. Good Snape v Ron reactions! Eager for more.
Author's Response: hmm I thought the dream was a bit undetailed too. But I had wanted to make it surreal and dreamlike, but didnt know how to do italics...so...but new chapter is up!
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