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Reviews For Brothers
PLease update soon. I have a picture in my head that snape and Hermione have to........................Anyway, Thanks
ooh... this is really good snape is so obviously an introvert, i like that you acknowledge it...but the gentle part is so humorous! *images of snape peting pygmie puffs enters mind* but i don't doubt it cheers!
Ooh, this is interesting! Hmm, my current guess is that James and Severus are brothers, but I could be wildly mistaken (I often am!). I like how Hermione had calculated the bad days; that was so very Hermione. Snape's clothes were fun, with the dangerous edge to an elegant ensemble. Snape vs Voldemort was also fun. Snape was pretty brave there; what a horrible game to play. The comparison between torture and teaching was also cool; though one has to wonder why he stays teaching if he hates it... I really enjoyed reading this chapter; I like your dialogue and your descriptions. Author's Response: Thank you very much. It is a pleasure to see people enjoying the story. A wonderful artist by the name of perselus at Deviant art has illustrated Snape in his DE robes. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/22995064/ JJ
Author's Response: Thank you... this story will end up with a lot of Hermione, Harry, Snape and Moody ... :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Severus has quite a lot on his plate in this tale ( a the author knows what's coming) and it is going to get worse before it gets better.... JJ
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