Wow. What a powerful story so far, I'm really impressed! I can't wait to read more, so please keep it coming!
One thing, I found it a bit hard to believe how quickly Snape went from anger and disappointment back to sympathy in that chapter, because Snape stikes me as a person who would not take kindly to having their trust betrayed, but that's just me. It's still really great to read. Kudos!
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