| Title: Why did I do that?
| 21 Jun 2008 12:48 am
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| Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous)
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oh dear, thats so, so terrible!
So I was one of those people who read this on ff.net but came down with this disease called BONE-IDLE (otherwise known as LAZY) and didn't review. So here I am making up for past mistakes.
I LUFF this story. Seriously. Especially this first chapter, because it's so full of AWWW! moments and Harry-is-abused-ness. Which I only like because I know that Snapey is going to rescue him and/or bring down the wrath of ... well, Slytherin, I guess, on the Dursleys. XD
| Title: Why did I do that?
| 26 Jan 2005 3:55 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow this is interesting. I can't remember if you had the distatched Harry before of if this is new. Poor Harry. :( (BTW, I think that you should have had either a horizontal rule or some *** between the scene changes.) you have some great imagry in this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the imagery. I have a hard time with that. I really have to put a lot of thought into how things would look from one Pov to another. thanks :)
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