OMG SNAPEY YOU ARE A BASTARD. But I still love you. Even if you are conflicted and more than a little bit stupid when it comes to Harry. Not to mention the fact that you have essentially reduced him to tears ...
Your points have dropped faster than an anvil dropped off a cliff for that little transgression, but I still love you XD
| Title: Warm Cider and Cold Words
| 13 Feb 2007 3:10 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
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This is a v. good line: "Apparently your relatives seem to lack conviction. Laziness runs in the family does it not?” I didn't know whether to laugh aloud or punch Snape's lights out. Maybe one, followed directly by the other?
You're managing to keep Snape inscrutable, which is all to the good. ;)
-K
Ooh! I love the rationalizations Harry's making. So pertinient to his past...and Snape is such a you-know-what!
| Title: Warm Cider and Cold Words
| 26 Jan 2005 4:05 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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:) Lovely chapter. I love how mysterious Snape is, it's so scary actually and a wonderful version of his character to have. you have some wonderful descriptions. I would have added another line before "This time he would not fall back asleep. He wanted to be aware of what was going on." in the beginning because it didn't show any passage of time. I love your interpretation of the interaction between Harry and Snape. Wonderful.
Author's Response: You know that's why I love fanfics. In reality (if they were real people) it would be so hard to force them to work together (or whatever) without having major problems (whether emotional or actual fist fighting). In my fics they never really like each other (like they wouldn't want to hang out together), but they aren't ever going to punch one another... they'll just scream and throw glares back and forth ;) (just kidding... sorta)
it's okay to cry. again, poor Harry he has to go through so much. (the pleasure of being authors?) Snape...he's not nothing, he's just very good at hiding his feelings. Of course being a Death Eater he would have had to get good at it fast...:D
Author's Response: Snape is very, very good at concealing his feelings... at times he reminds me of an ugly James Bond. He is a spy after all, hehe. :)
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