hehe. Snape-Lupin...I liked that though even though it didn't work. :)
Author's Response: Harry's a sharp kid when he wants to be... or when it seems to count. If things are going to work out in his favor he can be dumb though, like in the book with the Gillyweed. ;)
Wah! What did you change? The almost-thinking-its-Remus but-what's-wrong,something's-wrong is gone. I liked that sick realization I, as a reader went through during this chapter but it wasn't here this time. :( Anyways, I love Snape's manipulation tactics. It has such potential to mess with Harry and leave him confused, worried and fearful.
Author's Response: You know I didn't change hardly anything in these chapters, so maybe it's your pov that's changed somehow? Sorry, that you were a bit disappointed. Hehe, I know how that goes sometimes.
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