*sigh* Snape can't just be caring can he? ah. but that makes him so much fun. ;)
Author's Response: It does make him fun, huh? Crazy how that works, because if I had to deal with him in reality I'd probably hate it a lot.
| Title: Good Idea, Bad Idea
| 26 Jan 2005 5:28 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I liked this part: "He turned both the hot and cold spigots, but received nothing save for the empty sucking noise that the faucet had given to him moments before. Harry felt his insides squirm coldly. Now what little control he’d been clinging to had been cut off like the valves to his tub and sink." This chapter is missing some of the cold raw edge of uncertainty, Snape's uncertainness and Harry's desolution that I read last time i read it. I still love your Snape and all his sarcastic or snarky statements. Very nice.
Author's Response: ahh yes the spigot sound. I got that from a memory of mine. My dad was fixing our water line (and he neglected to tell me)... I had just came home from work in the summer. I was going to shower and change. I went into the bathroom and turned on the water and got that sound. It's a hollow sound... and I was like, oh crap! Not that a shower is the same as needing a drink, because I'm sure Harry was a lot more unhappy than I was, hehe.
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