| Title: It's Good For You! Eat It!
| 02 Jan 2008 11:02 am
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| Reviewer: Malora (Signed)
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I haven't finished the fic yet, but this is one of my favorite chapters so far. There's just something about that torture that's good for you—the "take your medicine" torture that just gets me.
"There, there, try to relax while I shove this tube down your throat and feed you vomit." Ack! Painful in such a good way. :)
*snickers* Calm down, that would tend to prove hard. :D
Author's Response: Yes, I can imagine that would be most difficult!
| Title: It's Good For You! Eat It!
| 26 Jan 2005 5:33 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I love the end of this chapter. Poor Harry. Poor poor boy. You should probably work on the dozing off in the tub part- it left me in the transition and I was exited from the fic a little while I tried to get what happened in my mind straight. The... I don't want to say manipulation but the uncertainty and dynamics between Snape and Harry is missing. It used to be here so maybe you should look at your notes and try to get that terrifying 'what's-Snape-going-to-do-next" feeling back.
Author's Response: Poor Harry indeed, but I love to torture him. Whether I'm writing or reading a toture fic it's always kinda fun to see Harry struggle (as long as he comes out ok in the end of the story).
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