Aww excellent. I especially loved the idea that the moon tear was a comfort gift for children and that Snape would think to give Harry one. They went through a lot together- and both still stayed in character! Excellent!
| Title: It's Good For You! Eat It!
| 02 Jan 2008 11:02 am
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| Reviewer: Malora (Signed)
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I haven't finished the fic yet, but this is one of my favorite chapters so far. There's just something about that torture that's good for you—the "take your medicine" torture that just gets me.
"There, there, try to relax while I shove this tube down your throat and feed you vomit." Ack! Painful in such a good way. :)
| Title: Puddle on the Carpet
| 06 Nov 2007 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Anamika (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry! He wet himself! I am happy at the way you treated Snape's reaction though. He was really caring and sweet. Good story.
AHAHA I don't want to say it, Harry, but I totally told you so. Snapey is too Slytherin for his own good, the sneaky bastard XD
NOOO Harry don't drink the cider!!!11!! Honestly, the world is throwing big fat HINTS at you and all you are doing is letting them thwack you firmly in the forehead.
Also ... Snapey, you aren't very good with people. Honestly. I think you really need to work on your people skills. Or, you know, your lack thereof.
OMG SNAPEY YOU ARE A BASTARD. But I still love you. Even if you are conflicted and more than a little bit stupid when it comes to Harry. Not to mention the fact that you have essentially reduced him to tears ...
Your points have dropped faster than an anvil dropped off a cliff for that little transgression, but I still love you XD
SNAPEY I LOVE YOU FOR A REASON.
You are so good to Harry ... even when you start of as being a bit of a bastard and are totally like "I care not!". You are still nice, in a sort of roundabout way XD
I luff. C:
So I was one of those people who read this on ff.net but came down with this disease called BONE-IDLE (otherwise known as LAZY) and didn't review. So here I am making up for past mistakes.
I LUFF this story. Seriously. Especially this first chapter, because it's so full of AWWW! moments and Harry-is-abused-ness. Which I only like because I know that Snapey is going to rescue him and/or bring down the wrath of ... well, Slytherin, I guess, on the Dursleys. XD
Great story! I was sooo pissed with Snape's attitude in the beginning and how he kept drugging Harry. But as time, went he slowly changed to be a bit nicer. Overall, excellent job on your story!
| Title: Trust
| 02 Apr 2007 4:38 am
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| Reviewer: honore (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed that. Thanks
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