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Title: And they think I am an unfit parent?	21 Mar 2005 7:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)	[Report This]

I liked how Petunia gave a potentially insulting 'that brat isn't half the child my son is' and Snape shot back with a literal “Thank god for small favors!”. Witty. I felt that Snape had a little too many juvinille insults. In one of the paragraphs he described the Dursleys as being a type of anime in almost every sentence. I like how Snape is taking charge and providing for his son, giving him everything he can. This chapter ended on another weird note, but I enjoyed it and I'm glad that there's more chapters to read. :)

Title: And they think I am an unfit parent?	19 Mar 2005 8:53 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed)	[Report This]

:D nice chapter. Go Serverus.