Potions and Snitches :: Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Time to Redecorate	21 Mar 2005 7:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)	[Report This]

Aww, that's going to be a sweet room! :) Some things in this chapter felt more staged... like the Owl appearing, and the mentions of the Dursley's reactions. I liked how Harry had a quandary over whether to tell the truth about his room, and how Snape got him to tell him truthfully. I also liked the way in which Snape just decided that the second bedroom would be Harry's from now on. The book lettering rearranging themselves was really cool. I liked Harry's thoughts about preschool and learning letters. It really added to his character in showing a childhood issue as well as what Harry wanted to do.