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Reviews For To Be A Father
Title: Diagon Alley 21 Mar 2005 7:29 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the description of the forest mural desgn and how the branches would go over the bed, creating a sort of a canopy. That's truly magical. I liked the stores that they visited- they were really unique. The bathroom in the closet is a neat idea. You added a degree of reality by adding in that it couldn't be done right away and that it wouldn't be able to be used for the first 24 hours. Muggle is always supposed to be capitalized.

    It would be really interesting to speculate and see what the strange arrangements Harry would have growing up might affect him. Psychology-wise. He would be a child yet his current guardians would be over showed and corrected by a man who would only see him once every other weekend. While they had an abusive background to Harry, now his main disciplinarians wouldn't really be able to discipline him for the things that a normal child would be disciplined for either. If Harry didn't like anything they did, he would be able to run away to his room and hide in it (if it had a locking charm or if the house elf were around) and he would be able to complain to his 'Papa' who would listen to him solely and do something about it. There is a lot of potential for abuse by Harry.

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