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Title: Discovery 25 Nov 2013 12:41 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: Discovery 18 May 2008 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW! I'm in shock, I have not read such a good first chapter in a while. Brilliant, you really grab the readers attention and hold onto it. The idea of Harry having multiple personalities is so cool. I like that idea and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
Title: Discovery 17 Sep 2006 8:07 pm
Reviewer: lmaynard_nelson (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just completed reading this story straight through, and I must say it was fantastic.  It kept me captivated until the end and I'm very happy that Harry got his revenge.  Thanks for such an interesting and unique story.
Title: Discovery 11 May 2006 5:37 am
Reviewer: emy_grrl@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Did you get this idea from a movie? And if so, what was it a called, cause it was really good, but I can't remember the name. About a girl and she was... kidnapped... she had MPD as well. Anyways, fantastic story. Email me back at emy _ grrl @ hotmail . com if you can...
Title: Discovery 23 Nov 2005 2:23 pm
Reviewer: Megz (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Actually not a sequel that might ruin it ummm like a story that is simerlar or something

    love this story though i read it all in one sitting

Title: Discovery 10 Nov 2005 3:27 am
Reviewer: kira (Anonymous) [Report This]

    wow this is soooo, cool harry with MPD that is just roichous!

     

     

Title: Discovery 18 Aug 2005 5:43 pm
Reviewer: pimpilidimpi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fascinating idea
Title: Discovery 21 Mar 2005 4:41 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hiyas. :) I'm reading this again. I really liked the idea for this story. The scene after class where Snape first asked Harry to explain himself was intense... I loved your description and how you wrote it. The introduction of Harry's other personalities seemed a little set-up, like it would seem more in character if Snape hadn't been met point blank with it but doing it with a slow and careful set-up would have been boring so I'm glad that you did it this way. I got the Foster part, how he said "You're bad at this" a lot better this time knowing all about him, I found it funny and cute. Umm... I think that you forgot to mention whether the glamour came back up before Harry returned to himself and left.

    For a nitpicking detail, you missed a u in this line: "He hated it, it scared him and left him feeling helpless and Harry would even suffer working with Severs Snape, Potions Master of Hogwarts and Greasy Git extraordinaire, if it meant getting rid of them."

    I LOVE the scene where Snape first meets Tom. The second time around it's even better. You ended the chapter on a really good spot. I guess I'll end on something I said before, that it might look better if you made the written parts italics. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the correction, I never catch stuff like that. And it's good to know that this is even better the second time around ;)
Title: Discovery 21 Mar 2005 12:14 am
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story, has lots of potential

    Author's Response: Oh, good. I was afraid there wouldn't be an audience for this here. I'll post the other chapters now. Thanks for reviewing!

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