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Reviews For Me, Myself and I
Actually not a sequel that might ruin it ummm like a story that is simerlar or something love this story though i read it all in one sitting
wow this is soooo, cool harry with MPD that is just roichous!
For a nitpicking detail, you missed a u in this line: "He hated it, it scared him and left him feeling helpless and Harry would even suffer working with Severs Snape, Potions Master of Hogwarts and Greasy Git extraordinaire, if it meant getting rid of them." I LOVE the scene where Snape first meets Tom. The second time around it's even better. You ended the chapter on a really good spot. I guess I'll end on something I said before, that it might look better if you made the written parts italics. :) Author's Response: Thanks for the correction, I never catch stuff like that. And it's good to know that this is even better the second time around ;)
Author's Response: Oh, good. I was afraid there wouldn't be an audience for this here. I'll post the other chapters now. Thanks for reviewing! |
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