Oh. Dear. Can't wait to see how this goes!
So this chapter thoroughly crept me out. I'm loving this story!
WOW.
I had a whole, big, ungainly paragraph of what I wanted to say as I got to this final chapter, but words suddenly fail me. This... this... it's - where to begin! I adore Tom and Foster - they're my favorites, and the idea itself and the way you executed it was BRILLIANT. I find myself quite suddenly and exceedingly grateful for insomnia (if you have it, might as well put it use, eh?).
Can't say as I fully understand what was "behind" the last door - perhaps I am slower than I fancy myself? - but I don't find myself feeling that the story lacks in the slightest, so I guess that's okay. (Though, if you feel the impulse to enlighten me, I won't complain.)
Anyhow - I'm babbling. I love this fic. A lot. I'd give it Double-Awesome if that were possible, and considering that I like just about everything, believe me when I say that that truly is a high commendation on my part. (Don't suppose you have any other fics stashed away somewhere..?)
Again: AWESOME FIC. Thanks for sharing!!
Aww I really liked this, especially the way it ended. A lot of thought went into this fic I'll bet, and it shows with how well-written and thought out it is, very nice fic ^^
I just love this: There was a reason Severus had always assumed Potter had been pampered at home – it was because, had Potter been placed in his care, that was what he would have done.
it gives me great ideas for fics in the future so thanks ^-^ - I'm absolutely loving this and am immediately going to read more... now... ^^
| Title: Epilogue
| 26 Oct 2008 10:58 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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I liked your stroy, especially the "open" end: we can imagien that Harry and Snape will grow close as they live together...
Remarkably well done! This was so well written and a joy to read! You must forgive me for I might be obtuse but what memory does James hold? When James merged what was he with holding? Why were the others so mad at him? Please write a short follow up side story just explaining what James gave back to Harry and how Harry is doing with Severus. If not that makes me really sad but I understand. I love your story and I just had to tell you that you did a fabulous job!
Love and a Peace,
Kates
This was an incredible fic. Utterly phenomenal in regards to plot, execution, characterization. It had it all. I don't have enough adjectives to describe the way it made me feel. Great work!
Very well done story! Dealing with so many personalities is tough and you did a fantastic job.
| Title: Epilogue
| 02 Jun 2008 2:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous)
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OH MY GOSH! I just read straight through this today and it was AWESOMEE! The plot was excellent, and the writing was fantastic!! You are a terrific and potential author. I hope you write more!! You worked the cliffhangers really well, and lots of things shocked the lights out of me!! The story was really suspenseful and I love how you made all those split personalities! That was really creative and original. I'm sorry I'm rambling but this story was incredible! I was really amazed at this particular story. You would have done really well if you owned Harry POtter.
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