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Reviews For Flames of Betrayal
Title: Twenty One 01 Apr 2015 2:27 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Ron and Percy finally got together and ironed out their differences. Ron must be relieved to have at least a bit of his old family back.
Title: Twenty 01 Apr 2015 2:14 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad there was an explanation chapter to get everyone (including us) up to speed. I don't always like evil Dumbledore stories but your Dumbledore is just so delightfully bad that I look forward to finding out what evil he has perpetrated next. All the twists and turns in the story have me guessing as well. Really fun story!
Title: Nineteen 01 Apr 2015 3:52 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    So that was what Dobby and Snape set up for Dumbledore. I wonder if that will shake some of the esteem everyone has for him? If the photos appear in the Prophet, it should hurt his popularity. And really piss him off.
Title: Eighteen 01 Apr 2015 3:36 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, now Sirius is caught up on the happenings since he was imprisoned. I wouldn't want to be Remus. Severus and Sirius joining forces is a scary thought.
Title: Seventeen 01 Apr 2015 12:01 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That scene with Snape had to be a shock for Sirius. Things have changed a lot in the last two years. Or the last two months. I hope he and Snape can get along OK.
Title: Sixteen 31 Mar 2015 4:07 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I had to laugh at Ron's reaction when Severus seemed shocked that he no longer had pain from the Dark Marks. It was the same thing that occurred to me. If I had low grade pain constantly from 2 marks, I would be crabby, too. I was glad that Sirius made it out but it was a shame about Winky.
Title: Fifteen 31 Mar 2015 3:53 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I sounds like Dobby will be rescuing Sirius soon. I wonder how he and Severus will get along? They have a shared goal so that may be enough to get them started.
Title: Fourteen 31 Mar 2015 3:25 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Yipee! They found the ring and the journal. And with Severus finishing the research on getting rid of the Dark Mark, they should have him free in no time.
Title: Thirteen 31 Mar 2015 3:56 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wondered why Severus was bound to Dumbledore. He must have been relieved to have some of his spells removed.
Title: Twelve 31 Mar 2015 3:29 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Harry might have gone a bit wacky in Azkaban. Or maybe he is just taking after his father more. Dobby is taking to being a free elf and showing a lot of initiative.

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