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Reviews For Flames of Betrayal
Title: Thirty-One 28 May 2007 11:41 pm
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    ... me thinks you likes to write Azkaban stories... you are getting close to becoming on of my favorite authors... though sometimes i get your stories confused. [like halfway through this one i said to myself.. where are the Protectors.. then i realized.. other story.. ding dong] but it's wonderful... update when you can:)
Title: Twenty Nine 23 Nov 2006 5:49 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was kinda hard to read, I suggest you reformat it... you don't have too, but I assume you meant it to have a little more white space
Title: Thirty-One 23 Nov 2006 5:47 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow... it annoys me... I have a problem... when the stories i read reach the best point so far, I can't seem to find the next button... I would give you some CC, but honestly I can't find anything wrong with it.
Title: One 13 Nov 2006 5:12 am
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So, are you still updating this?  Please say you are as I am hooked.  Thanks
Title: Thirty-One 18 Jul 2006 8:45 pm
Reviewer: deatheater (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Great Story realy, I havern't yet read any azkaban story that had been so inherent logic, than yours. Dumbledores got screwed!! I#m very interest what Harry will learn in the chambers, and what will happen to Hermine. I thought so much, that he would have done to quite a lot of people what he did to Remus. Just to mantain his apperance. There aren't stupid, loyal yes even blind but not stupid. Even the twins, why should they try to succumbe Ron? Dumbledore is evil, but more sublte then Voldemort...far more, thats makes much more dangerous. Because, in a way the dark lord is predictable. He is scheming and plotting, but still predictable. I've just one question. You said, Sirius got cleared, because of the capturing of Pettigcrew. But in later Chapters, Wormtail had been still in the service of Voldemort. Had he got freed? Have I missed something?

    Well all I'd lieke to say, that it's a truly graet story and I#m really hoping to read more of it. QUIT SOON!!

    Yours deatheater

     

Title: Thirty-One 22 May 2006 3:27 am
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really really good, very original and well-written. I especially like what you've done with Dobby and the free house elves. Please do update soon, I look forward to reading more.
Title: Thirty-One 12 May 2006 7:48 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story!!!!  Your Dobby is quite an original!  So is your story.  I hope you plan on continuing it.  Please???
Title: Thirty-One 06 Apr 2006 3:25 am
Reviewer: ilovemethos (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I really really like this story and am looking forward to reading more.  I am so intrigued by this story that I even went back to read the first 31 chapters hoping that by the time I finished the second reading there would be more.  Much to my dismay there wasn't.  But I hope you update it soon.

    Sherry

Title: Thirty-One 18 Mar 2006 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Would it be greedy to ask if there's going to be an update soon? 
Title: Thirty-One 19 Jan 2006 9:22 pm
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting... Harry finally has the last key he needs to prepare for this war, Luna and Neville finally have a way to get closer to them, and Hermione has finally had the blinders completely ripped off. *grin* I'd say everything is going smootly. lol. I wander who the 'mutual friend' that contacted Luna and Nev is... Well, only one way to find out! More Please! Asap!

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