Somehow the dark tones of this make me wonder if a companion story would be about Dark!dumbledore. No one deserves to be tortured and then confined with the torturer. Stockholm syndrom effects like Harry's understanding might ensue, but really could you forgive them in your right mind. If Dumbledore manipulated the whole thing, it would make some sense. Harry now trusts Snape, whom he previously doubted. He is also extremely grateful. Snape had his mind manipulated, more may have occurred than he knew. Yet he too is grateful for Dumbledore's understanding and help. Well written, but sure brings up some ideas doesn't it?
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| 11 Aug 2005 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Lydia (Anonymous)
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i very much like how you ended this story...it was very realistic =)
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| 26 Jun 2005 6:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Mariposa (Anonymous)
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Ummmmmmm, I don't get it? MAybe I read this story too late at night? Sorry, there just seemed to be too little explaination in the end.
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| 17 Jun 2005 5:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Andromeda Snape-Malfoy (Anonymous)
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Great story. You might want to update your summary though - it has this as a Snape-meets-the-Dursleys fic.
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| 04 Jun 2005 2:24 am
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| Reviewer: angel of chaos (Anonymous)
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hmmm that was realy good. i like your writing syle, very original, i liked this story alot.
Good story. Wonder how Harry and Severus' relationship will be now.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :)
Ahhh, I do love this story! it's so wonderful. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you like it! Thanks! :)
Really good story!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Wow. Great start and it pulled me right in. I liked the mystery and terror the figure in black invoked in the beginning and the frustration Harry losing time, not knowing what happened and apparently not caring invoked. Who will come for him? And what happened to him?
Author's Response: Second HP fic I ever wrote! I worked on that beginning part for weeks until I got it the way I wanted it! I'm glad that you liked it, because I actually put a lot of work into this one, hehe :)
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