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I'm really enjoying your story so far, and I think you've definately got something here, but it's a bit hard to really get into things when your chapters are this short. No offense, it's just a minor criticism.
I look forward to updates! Please don't give up, because like I said, I think you might really have something here.
Cheers
this sounds like a good story. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Good luck. Lots of love though no potions, Kira |
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