Title: Failed Experiments
| 01 Jul 2005 8:34 pm
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Reviewer: Glor (Anonymous)
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I think Sev should met the "strange boy" in the next chapter. Great job on the story, by the way.
I like the way you introduced this chapter, it something new and different, but it fits the setting perfectly. The ending was so sweet "Wake up little one". Thanks for sharing this! I'll give this chapter a 7 because it was well written, introduced the mystery without giving too much away and it was such a good teaser.
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