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Title: Valediction 09 Jul 2013 4:28 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus was out of line when he mistreated Harry but Harry had been pushing his buttons ever since they arrived at the house. It was a matter of time before he snapped. Too bad that he didn't just give Harry a lecture and then go blow something up to let off steam. Unlike Dumbledore, I don't see Harry as entirely blameless here.
Title: Valediction 13 Oct 2006 2:51 pm
Reviewer: purpleygirl (Signed) [Report This]

    I feel really bad now, but I'm going to review anyway, because I can't believe this hasn't got any reviews yet.

    The reason I feel bad about this is that I read some chapters a while ago, but stopped reading because long fics put me off in general (and I must be a massive hypocrite for this, because my fic will probably be around 35- 40 chapters in the end!), and stopped reading as much fanfic in general.

     So, I just jumped into this chapter now, after missing much of your story out. But I think it can be read on its own -- and in fact, I like that about it as well. It has lovely moments of Harry and Severus trying to get on, and I love it. I love the way Harry feels he shouldn't give up on Snape. It's all so well written. I keep putting off/dreading writing the times I'll have to have Harry and Severus in such open moments myself -- but this was an utter pleasure to read. You draw Snape so well, I really feel I can imagine the characters in this.

    I think I feel a bit less guilty now. Phew. ;)



    Author's Response:

    Long fics put you off? Oh dear, this fic will reach about 100 chapters! Still, I understand where you are coming from- I rarely read fanfiction, though admittedly, when I do it's a novel length romance and I read it over the course of a few days.

    Naturally, I would suggest reading the whole fic, because you have missed so much, but I'm sure you have limited time and just getting this monster chapter read was a difficult enough task in itself! But if you do want to read the whole thing, but worry about length, I always find it is better to copy and paste the whole story into one word document and read it over time.

    You don't have to feel guilty about not reviewing- this story actually has been reviewed for this chapter, but most of that is on fanfiction.net. Still, I do appreciate that you took the time to drop me a line!

    Thanks,

    ~Gonnabefamous


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