Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Burdens of a War 10 Oct 2019 12:25 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Maybe it's just me but it's so
    Beyond frustrating that Harry is being portrayed as basically an impatient arrogant idiot while Hermione -- & Ginny -- are the matured strong intelligent ones. And bow Hermione is so important that Severus basically had to talk to her whenever he talks to his own son? Not to mention she had the nerve to tell Harry to shut up when he told her what happened -- though he shouldn't have even told her that much. Like come on she needs to realize that she is absolutely nothing without Harry's coattails for her to ride on
Title: The Burdens of a War 05 Jul 2009 12:23 pm
Reviewer: asdf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Been reading for a while now and just needed to comment, I didn't like Hermione in this chapter. Sorry but I just thought she was patronising and trying to 'mother' Harry and I found her annoying.

    Other than that I really am enjoying your story, the plot twist with Neville was horrible (I mean about what happened to his parents) and I can't wait to see if he becomes more involved in the plot.
Title: The Burdens of a War 27 Feb 2007 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Suiteki (Signed) [Report This]
    I just love your fic... it's brilliant!
    I read alsmost half of the story on fanfiction.net, but now I do here, as I think potions & snitches is more organized and 'cleaner'...
    I admire you - you've got great talent and the patience to still write on this one fic even after you've written so much (and long) chapters of it!
    Thanks for sharing! It's awesome!

    Author's Response:

    Lol, I myself am sometimes still surprised when I look at how much I've written. It's pleasing to know other people draw enjoyment from my simple hobby.

     Thanks for your review!


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