| Title: A Brand New Thorn
| 16 Jul 2010 4:00 pm
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| Reviewer: IckeRonniekins (Anonymous)
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Gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Go on, when was the last time u updated?????????
This story is one of my favs, so I'm correcting the wee errors..plz don't take it badly - it's "desolate", not desolated".
| Title: The House
| 23 Sep 2009 6:35 am
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| Reviewer: Katie S. (Anonymous)
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I love love love LOVE this story!!! I can't wait to finish it! you really should write a sequel, you've got talent!
| Title: Hope
| 07 Aug 2009 9:02 am
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| Reviewer: Britt (Anonymous)
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This story is amazing! the Charaters are the same as in Rowlings books, and yet you can give them more emotions from situations that we've never seen before. This is a wonderful read!
...........Why haven't I read this......?
| Title: The Burdens of a War
| 05 Jul 2009 12:23 pm
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| Reviewer: asdf (Anonymous)
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Been reading for a while now and just needed to comment, I didn't like Hermione in this chapter. Sorry but I just thought she was patronising and trying to 'mother' Harry and I found her annoying.
Other than that I really am enjoying your story, the plot twist with Neville was horrible (I mean about what happened to his parents) and I can't wait to see if he becomes more involved in the plot.
Wow, this took a LONG time to catch up with, but now I'm with everyone else in having to wait for the next update and all.
I love the positive note at the end of this chapter, with Harry finally starting to believe that he may very well win and survive the confrontation with old Moldyshorts.
| Title: A Milder Sort of Christmas
| 18 May 2009 7:45 am
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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You were right; quite gratifyingly long! I haven't reviewed yet only because I've got 44 chapters to finish reading before I catch up with you, and it seems a little silly to make suggestions about things when the next several chapters are already published.
That said, it also seems a bit ungrateful to never say anything in appreciation for the entertainment you are providing me, so I'll say it now: I am really into this story so far and have spent several very enjoyable hours reading it. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us!!!
Waaay too blissful. Don't do it. She is gone.
| Title: A Brand New Thorn
| 18 Jan 2009 1:28 am
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| Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous)
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Excellent development of characters and especially the growing relationship between Severus and Harry.
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