Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 12 - Retaliation I 18 Feb 2006 8:39 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, great chapter! :) I liked how Snape went and visite dthe Grangers'. He's in character. The cat, Midnight, was a nice touch. I like that Snape's going to be staying with Harry for awhile. :)
Title: Chapter 21 - Dane Robinson 17 Feb 2006 7:04 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! You finally reviewed. I like the slowness of your story - it shows good pacing and detail to plot. I like the way it's going, so keep it up. Though we wouldn't mind another spanking thrown our way once and a while ;)
Title: Chapter 21 - Dane Robinson 17 Feb 2006 1:54 am
Reviewer: Sherry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, done!!  Well, done indeed.  Please keep it up.  I truly enjoy your story.  And Harry's wish Ahh!  That was really sweet.
Title: Chapter 21 - Dane Robinson 17 Feb 2006 1:02 am
Reviewer: me (Anonymous) [Report This]

    major 'awwwww' factor here. soo sweet. yeah for updates, so happy you did. can't wait for the next one

Title: The werewolf Incident 15 Feb 2006 12:31 am
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]

    omg. ok, get a life. if you don't like the theme or the story, don't read it, and don't review it. you were warned beforehand. that's like people reading slash, after it says, don't read it if you don't like slash, and then critisising (can't spell that) it, for SLASH!!!  That's soooo dumb. i'm sure you have better things to do with your time, and i'm sure dina has something better to do with hers besides reading your critisisims(can't spell that). and, btw, in several studies spanking has been proved a very successful tool for correcting children, and as long as it isn't taken over the edge, it isn't going to emotionally scar them. please, save us all the energy of reading your critisisms. (can't spell that)

     

     



    Author's Response: My dear azamystic, thanks thanks thanks.  It is very cool to find people defending you like that.  Love you!.
Title: The werewolf Incident 30 Jan 2006 6:18 am
Reviewer: Renee (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Hitting is abuse!!

    http://www.stophitting.com/disathome/aliceMiller.php 

Title: Chapter 20 - What's Normal? 28 Jan 2006 10:06 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter as always! So Draco is the other brat who  is getting spanked. Can't wait for him to appear. There is bound to be some trouble, as none of them is used to sharing Sev. Will there be some jealousy and fights between them? And please no slash! It would be nice to have Sev take care of a sick Harry. Did McGonnagal ever spanked Sev or was she just squeezing his ears? Please update soon! Is it from now on always taking you a month to update?
Title: Chapter 20 - What's Normal? 26 Jan 2006 6:25 pm
Reviewer: Marietsy (Signed) [Report This]

    As for people saying this story is boring or dull because there is no action, well that is just dumb. I like the story. I have no problems with CP since my parents spanked when I was a youngster and I don't find it offensive. I like the idea of Snape taking care of Harry. It's sweet. As for Harry being childish, well yeah, he's emotionally stunted in some areas. If he hasn't had enough love in his life, it's bound to leave some effects on the poor boy.

    I enjoy this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I've even put it in my favorites. *grin* Good job!

Title: Chapter 20 - What's Normal? 24 Jan 2006 12:27 am
Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous) [Report This]

    After all the waiting it has finally came YES! :D I loved it like every other chapter you have wrote, I do notice that your writing skills are enhancing a lot! Which just makes the story even better! I love how Harry and Severus are becoming closer, is Snape going to adopt Harry later on? I hope so...they both deserve it! I think the smacking is the funny element of the story and it just wouldn't be the same without it! I just simply love this story and you! One of the best authors I think and I have read LOADS of stories! Please update as soon as you can, dont want to nag you teehee....

     Looking forward to next time...

     xxx

Title: Chapter 20 - What's Normal? 23 Jan 2006 6:13 pm
Reviewer: Perry Dantzler (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great to see another chapter posted already! I love this story and can't wait to see where it leads. I like Snape this way, all stern but caring. As for the negative comments about CP, you did give the warning, and if readers won't read it, it's not your fault. I'd like to see some of Snape's memories regarding previous discipline session (you know Draco had to tick him off at sometime). So keep writing, and we'll keep reading!

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