Title: Chapter 15 - The Last Day
| 11 Oct 2005 1:14 am
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Reviewer: me (Anonymous)
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Title: Chapter 15 - The Last Day
| 24 Sep 2005 10:16 pm
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Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous)
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Another great chapter! Keep them coming hehe :D
Title: Chapter 15 - The Last Day
| 23 Sep 2005 10:12 pm
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Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Great chapter as always. I really enjoyed Snape's talk with Harry before and after rhe spanking. It shows how much he cares for Harry.
Although I don't understand how Harry is about to blow up at Snape because of the spanking and the next minute it seems forgotten and everything is fine. That change of mood seemed a bit sudden.
I always forgot to ask: in Retaliation 1 when Snape experiences first hand how the Dursleys treat Harry, how come he didn't thouroghly check Harry for other injuries.
Can't wait for the next chapter! I*'m curious what is gonna go wrong. Will the Dursleys try to stop Harry from leaving?
Title: Chapter 14 - Retaliation III
| 21 Sep 2005 11:21 pm
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Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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I enjoy seeing Harry and Snape becoming closer. Snape seems to have had a poor childhood as well. Did Dumbledore plays a similiar role to Snape as Snape to Harry now?
lol!! I kinda pity the Dursleys. ... Or not. *smirk* It'd serve 'em right to have Snape hex their asses to Tahiti! *glare* Seriously! *sigh* *smile* Snape and Harry... such a sweet picture. *snicker* Where can I get some of that potion? I've quite a few people I could use it on. *smirk* Both of my parents for starters. *snicker* Great fic! I love it! NEXT CHAP!
Title: Chapter 13 - Retaliation II
| 01 Sep 2005 9:39 am
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Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter!
Snape is turning into a great parent. Although assigning lines seems to be more the punishment of a teacher.
I feel sorry for Snape for having such a poor homelife and that he felt betrayed by Dumbledore. And now the same happens to Harry. Knowing about this, will he try now to get a legal guardianship over Harry to help him?
I hope so, because Harry needs a fatherfigure.
I wonder will Dudley get in trouble with Snape?
Please update soon!
Title: Chapter 13 - Retaliation II
| 31 Aug 2005 11:43 pm
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Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous)
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Another great chapter!! It was nice that harry's relatives acted as if they cared even if they were brainwashed! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Title: Chapter 12 - Retaliation I
| 22 Aug 2005 11:40 am
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Reviewer: Thrior (Anonymous)
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Really should be an interesting week XD.
Good chapter. I definetily want to read more.
Title: Chapter 12 - Retaliation I
| 21 Aug 2005 5:13 pm
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Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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LOL, too cute. Nice chapter
Title: Chapter 12 - Retaliation I
| 21 Aug 2005 5:55 am
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Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous)
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Oh my god, you are amazing!!! I absolutly love this story, i can't wait to read more. Please Please update soon :D
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