| Title: Chapter 31 - Silly I
| 23 Nov 2008 10:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous)
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YAY!! You updated!!! This chapter was great, but it was sad. 'snif, snif' Please please please please please update soon!
Nyx:)
| Title: Chapter 31 - Silly I
| 23 Nov 2008 10:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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YES! The great come back! And I was afraid that this fanfiction won't be continued...
Wonderful Severus history. I think Sylvia was killed by her father, wasn'e she? Tragic.
Spanking. Ah, yes, I like it IN THIS FANFICTION. Cause here it is WITH reason. And Harry knows that if he would do something dangerous he would have sore bottom. It's simply like that. Spanking of this kind I can understand. Especially when there is love between parent and child - I here it is. Ovelhelming love which I can easy feel. So... you have my attention.
I think I've spotted one mistake: "Satisfied, Snape used his WANT to summon an old photo album" - shouldn't be "WAND"?
| Title: Chapter 31 - Silly I
| 23 Nov 2008 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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thank you so much new chapter.im happy for draco go away.yes poor boy but i want snape and harry father and son development relationships.
im sorry for snape' family history.poor man.i liked when harry comfort him.
| Title: Chapter 30 - Bats and Dragons
| 09 Oct 2008 7:24 pm
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| Reviewer: shan (Anonymous)
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great story! continue updating! will await new chapters. :)
| Title: Chapter 30 - Bats and Dragons
| 08 Sep 2008 12:03 pm
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| Reviewer: forest (Anonymous)
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More please, pweety please
I just discovered this story a couple of days ago. Great story. I don't believe I've read Harry written quite this way before. Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 16 - The Goodbyes
| 04 Sep 2008 5:43 am
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Still very creative and emotional...Good job
oh please more! i just re-read this and im all excited for more again!
Yay! I'm so happy you updated! This story is one of my absolute favourites and I was so happy to see you updated. Now if only I could do so as well for my story. XD
I found Harry's story adorable, I'm so glad you shared that with us. I have to say though that I find the whole 'abused Draco' clichéd. Sorry, but that is my humble opinion. This stry is cute and sweet, I love the emotions!
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