| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 04 Feb 2022 2:37 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That was a very encouraging end to the chapter. I’d love to see how Duncan and Snape’s relationship develops, and hope you come back to this story one day.
| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 29 Oct 2012 3:00 am
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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Okay it's been 7 years since you wrote this, any plans to finish it? I certainly hope so as it's just an awesome story that NEEDS TO BE FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hello are you listening? Why are the best stories always abandoned and left unfinished??? Hello? Hellooooo?????????
| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 03 Feb 2011 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I like it and can't wait to read more. Severus is a vampire and a pureblood, really? Professor Sprout's first name is Pomona. I am glad that you made Hermione Harry/Duncan's love interest. I hate Ginny with a passion as well. I'm not too fond of Ron, either. I like that Dudley is a muggleborn wizard. Looking forward to the Severus/Duncan and Duncan/Hermione relationships to grow.
Ooooh, this is so brilliant! Really well written, and an amazing plot!
| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 29 Apr 2009 5:54 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Wow, I guess you're not finishing this story unfortunately. It has so much potential.
| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 22 Feb 2009 5:49 pm
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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This story is really great so far! I congratulate you for how well you write in English. If I were to write in Spanish as everyone always asks me to do, I would probably make a lot of mistakes, too. But I don't like to do it because the ideas flow more smoothly for me in English. So I admire your courage in writing in a language that is not your own. It can't be as comfortable for you as Spanish!
Oh, I really, really love this fic. THe whole thing about Lily being a seer, the letters, all the preparations and planning, the very realistic way you handled Harry's emotional response to everything, his debate about the matter of forgiveness, everything. When I read the description of Duncan's true appearance, I so wished that I could draw people. The image your description put in my mind is just fabulous. I also loved Hedwig's "makeover".
I do hope that you come back to this fic sometime and continue it. I promise I will not nag (it would be hypocritical considering I have two incomplete fics in another genre that I haven't been able to do anything with for nearly a year and a half).
Bravi, bravi, bravissimi! You are an excellent writer and I'm going to go and read some of your other stuff now.
| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 04 Aug 2008 10:49 am
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| Reviewer: Mara (Anonymous)
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OMG! I firmly believe this is the best one yet! And I also firmly believe that you must have some Slytherin in you. Leaving me hanging at such a critical part. I have to know what happens when he goes to see Harry/Duncan at Gringotts. I was so into this story that it took me a moment to realize that there was no next button! I almost started yelling. I really need to get some sleep. I told myself that I would only read until midnight. I started this and it is now ten minutes until three in the morning. You are too good. *dies*
| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 10 Jan 2008 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous)
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Please, please tell me you didn't abandon this story!!! I want to know how things develope, I really do, because this is a very original plot with many twists - I like it a lot!
i love the story please continue with it.
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