| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 29 Apr 2009 5:54 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Wow, I guess you're not finishing this story unfortunately. It has so much potential.
Oh man, when is Snape going to make an appearance? I'm sitting on pins and needles. I just can't wait to see his reaction.
Oh wow, does this mean that Harry's not going back to Hogwarts? I'm so looking forward to seeing Snape's reaction when he finds out that Harry is his son.
Ooh, can't wait. Will know one else know either about their relationship?
Wow, what a shock for Harry! I like the original twist you have on this.
On to the next chappie!
Poor Harry, Vernon is such a brute. Ooh, can't wait to see what the chest reveals, and the letter.
OOh, you should finish this story. I really like the begining. This is a different twist, and I'm looking forward to seeing them get away from Vernon.
| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 22 Feb 2009 5:49 pm
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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This story is really great so far! I congratulate you for how well you write in English. If I were to write in Spanish as everyone always asks me to do, I would probably make a lot of mistakes, too. But I don't like to do it because the ideas flow more smoothly for me in English. So I admire your courage in writing in a language that is not your own. It can't be as comfortable for you as Spanish!
Oh, I really, really love this fic. THe whole thing about Lily being a seer, the letters, all the preparations and planning, the very realistic way you handled Harry's emotional response to everything, his debate about the matter of forgiveness, everything. When I read the description of Duncan's true appearance, I so wished that I could draw people. The image your description put in my mind is just fabulous. I also loved Hedwig's "makeover".
I do hope that you come back to this fic sometime and continue it. I promise I will not nag (it would be hypocritical considering I have two incomplete fics in another genre that I haven't been able to do anything with for nearly a year and a half).
Bravi, bravi, bravissimi! You are an excellent writer and I'm going to go and read some of your other stuff now.
| Title: Don't you DARE snort Severus!
| 04 Aug 2008 10:49 am
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| Reviewer: Mara (Anonymous)
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OMG! I firmly believe this is the best one yet! And I also firmly believe that you must have some Slytherin in you. Leaving me hanging at such a critical part. I have to know what happens when he goes to see Harry/Duncan at Gringotts. I was so into this story that it took me a moment to realize that there was no next button! I almost started yelling. I really need to get some sleep. I told myself that I would only read until midnight. I started this and it is now ten minutes until three in the morning. You are too good. *dies*
Wow, i am really hooked ^^ Pet is actually nice and dudley seems to learn. Poor Harry, so confused.
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