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Title: Revelations 22 Mar 2011 9:20 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a good fic, it could use some more fleshing out and a little tweaking, if you would like, i'd be happy to beta for you
Title: Revelations 28 Jan 2007 2:16 am
Reviewer: Immy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like where this is going. I like how it is an anomaly from so many other severitus fics where dmbledore or someone asks harry about it and he answers. Here, dumble dore TELLS harry to talk, and he refuses. Much more likely to happen. I wish the chaps were longer though...
Title: Revelations 21 May 2006 7:52 pm
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting beginning, but I am uncomfortable with the scene in the hospital. Madam Pomfrey shouldn't reveal Harry's condition to Dumbledore and Snape because it violates doctor-patient confidentiality. I think that normally the only persons she could tell would be Harry's official guardians and while they aren't suitable in this instance, that doesn't mean that she would tell his professors while he's standing right there. Other than that, however, I think that this story has potential and I'd like to read more of it.
Title: Revelations 27 Apr 2006 6:21 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was really good beginning, it would develope a lovely story. I'm looking forward to hear more from you!
Title: Revelations 24 Apr 2006 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Maryaminx (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would be willing to check your grammar, spelling, etc., but I've never actually beta'd before so I don't know what sort of help I'd be with your content. If you're interested, you can contact me at mkennedy24158@yahoo.com I could look over your work until you find a proper beta.
Title: Rude Awakening 24 Apr 2006 2:52 pm
Reviewer: maur4mee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The misspellings in your summary may steer potential readers away from your story.  I suggest getting a pro to fix all spelling and grammatical errors.  Good luck.
Title: Harry’s Savior, or not. 22 Apr 2006 8:03 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Good start so far, I like it. If you want I would be more then happy to be your beta or help find you one. My e-mail is xjan_milliganx @ YAHOO.COM (with out the spaces of  course)

     You can also look me up here or on fanfiction.net under the SN Spiorad.

     ~Jan



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Title: Harry’s Savior, or not. 22 Apr 2006 12:57 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    Good beginning - I want to see where this goes.

    Update soon!

Title: Rude Awakening 11 Dec 2005 7:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice beginning, I always like stories where Snape has to collect Harry from his relatives. "Potter won't like this," Severus said. Haha! That was a GREAT line, I could totally hear it! You should keep writing!
Title: Rude Awakening 09 Dec 2005 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Kitsena (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm... This story was very short. I suppose you`re not finished with it, but the chapter was also short. But the story is probably alright. Can`t say much more than that since it was so short. But never mind that. Just keep up the good work, I think the story will turn out alright. I liked the idea of it!

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