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Title: Chapter 16: Volare Percipio
| 21 Sep 2007
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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I love that snake.....Brill story...
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen
| 10 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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I really like this - it was recommended on one of my yahoo groups. I was almost in tears at the beginning, until Sev caught on. I'm not to surprised with your portrayal of the "tabby" I never really saw her a decent head of house. She doesn't stricke me as someone you want to talk to about anything important. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Snape is left dying in the Shrieking Shack after giving Harry his memories convinced that Harry is going to his death. When Snape dies, he is given a chance to send his soul backwards in time seven years to give Harry a chance for a better (and hopefully longer) life. Will switch back and fourth between being Snape centered and Harry centered.
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 12
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Completed: No
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Updated: 05 Jun 2009 / 17 May 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
| 15 May 2009
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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Good Chapter. Small note - when Sev goes to the Shack to see Remus you have him listed as Lupin Lupin
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. Its fixed now.
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment
| 15 May 2009
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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Dratted leaky eyes...You wrote that very well, I could feel what Harry was feeling.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Reasons
| 21 May 2009
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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I have a feeling that the punishment will be for them to spend time together - even if they're doing something like scrubbing cauldrons.
Author's Response: Yes, you are right, but it won't be srubbing cauldrons. :)
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Punishment
| 25 May 2009
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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I like the punihsments, Although I'd hate to have to write a 10 page essay.
Author's Response: Maybe they will only have small pages to fill. :) Thank you for your review!
Stuck in a tunnel with an injured Harry Potter was the last thing Snape expected to happen. But when Potter get’s rather loose tongued thanks to a pain reliever, will Snape be forced to re-think his judgments of the boy?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Fic Fests > #6 Winter > Christmas, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 2
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 27 Dec 2008 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 16 May 2009
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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Cute little story - side note when Harry opens the present with the Crup in it you said it was a "plane" box, it should be a "plain" box.
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out, and tasking the time to review! :)
A summer trapped with Snape seemed the ultimate torture, but when Harry begins to trust his enemy, a terrible betrayal sends him spiraling into desperation. Will he have the strength to survive? Not canon. Mentions abuse. Takes place after 2nd year.
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 20: The Start of Something
| 08 May 2009
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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Wow, I just found your story and am glad I did. I do like angst stories, as long as they are well written and this one definitely fits the bill. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Title: Chapter 21: The Light in the Dark
| 13 May 2009
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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Wow that was a horrific nightmare, but it very clearly showed the struggle Harry is going through knowing that Craig was Snape and that the REAL Snape wouldn't hurt him, but still terrified that he will. I think the Dementors are Harry's fears of legillimancy.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Arrival at Hogwarts
| 14 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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At the end of your first chapter you asked if we thought this was cliched or not, I have to say I don't think so. Sure there have been other stories where the Dursley's abandoned Harry, usually somewhere in London, but so far this one is original. I can't wait for POppy to find out about the abuse, and I'm sure that Dumbles will use Legillamancy against the Dursley's - probably not on purpose, but they'll be projecting or something :-)
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