Harry and Dudley are attacked one evening, and Snape is called to fix it. A child sized Harry, who looks much more like Lily than James at this age, was not what he was expecting.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Deaged!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Melverne
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Jan 2021 / 25 Oct 2020
Series: Namesake Necklace - Challenges: None
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Jan 2021 / 25 Oct 2020
Series: Namesake Necklace - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- This is off to an interesting start. It has a nice word count and its complete. No glaring issues and enjoyable.
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Ahhhh. Great conflict in this chapter and Harry gets relocated. A nice continuation from the first chapter.
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- More conflict. This time between Snape and Harry. Please turns to be the magic word. This is a nice laidback story that is developing.
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Nice! This was a great chapter. A little action, a little drama and a bit of a cliff hanger to pull you into the next chapter. I've noticed Harry seems to be regressing emotionally but his intellect is intact. He has also maintened his knowledge and power as a wizard. I'm thoroughly enjoying this.
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Chuckle. The struggle of remembering Harry's real versus his apparent age was great. Harry's own struggles with the base desires of being a childcare keenly felt this chapter as well. Your story just keeps getting better with each chapter. Thank you for sharing.
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Damn... So many things to like about this chapter. The scene with Ron and Harry was brilliant. It is the little details that make this story great. Like when Harry nearly fell getting off the couch and Ron instinctively catching him. Everyone knows his age but can't overide the instict to respond to Harry's physical age. And Harry's own emotions overwhelm his logic.
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Lessons have been learned this chapter. And there is a strong chance of blood being shed over a battle for Harry. Nice job with the very tangible fear for Harry. It really highlighted just how much being smaller is affecting Harry. Being man handled, moved while he's sleeping and the helplessness of it all. It's all well done.
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- A lot of explanations in this chapter. And Harry reflecting on the Sorting Hats first choice of Slytherin. Harry getting swaddled was cute. I like that Snape has discovered that stroking Harry's nose calms him. It's a nice touch. Again its these little things that add so much tonyour story.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- You deserve far more reviews. I've recently started poking around potions and snitches. The only reward authors receive for their work is a review. The length and quality of the story is an investment of your time. And I greatly appreciate your time and talent in writting thiz story. Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Definitely leaning towards Harry being physically and emotionally six. A bit sad about Harry and Padfoot but a very realistic reaction. Harry is six and Padfoot would have as tall or possibly taller than Harry. Pad foot would have been easily 2 or 3 times Harry's weight. And Ripper had bit Harry previously. Yeah, no wonder Harry was scared.