Harry and Dudley are attacked one evening, and Snape is called to fix it. A child sized Harry, who looks much more like Lily than James at this age, was not what he was expecting.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Deaged!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Melverne
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Jan 2021 / 25 Oct 2020
Series: Namesake Necklace - Challenges: None
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Jan 2021 / 25 Oct 2020
Series: Namesake Necklace - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 11 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Another fine chapter. So far Dumbledore has been mentioned but has not shared a scene with Harry. I'm looking forward to that. The evolution of the relationship between Severus, Sirius and Remus has been very well done.
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 12 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Yup, I do not like Dumbledore. You have swayed me to that position. Even better you did it without bashing. This is definitely one of my favorite things about the story. You don't bash the characters. You use their flaws but you don't bash. And I love Harry's passive aggresive tactics.
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 12 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Oh boy. Things are going to get much worse before they get better.
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 12 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Nice! I really do enjoy the Severus, Remus an Sirius interaction parts. They've set a lot of their history to the side for Harry.
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 12 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- A good wind down chapter after the intensity of the previous ones. Again the little acknowledgements of Harry's physical age have been really well done.
| Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 | 12 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Tear jerker of an ending to this chapter. And damn Dumbledore. The way he is portrayed is fantastic. I've mentioned it before and I will again. You utilize character flaws withou resorting to bashing and there is no mockery of the Dark Lord or his name. You have written an amazing story.
| Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 | 12 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- This was a great story. I wish I had found this as you were writting it. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
Following the disasterous Third Task, Harry begins to notice two things about himself. First: his appearence has begun to change. Second: something is very very wrong. The Cruciatus shouldn't continue to be causing him pain this far out from having received it, should it?
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: Disguised!Harry, Injured!Harry, New Identity!Harry, Physical Impairment
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: Disguised!Harry, Injured!Harry, New Identity!Harry, Physical Impairment
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect, Out of Character
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Jan 2023 / 08 Jan 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Jan 2023 / 08 Jan 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 09 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- Found this gem in a random google search. It motivated me to create an account just to leave a review. This has been a great story. So glad I found it. Thank you for sharing.
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 09 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- I liked Shannon and I don't usually care for OCs. I'm glad you have plans to use her again.
| Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 | 09 Mar 2023 |
| Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) |
- This might be my favorite chapter so far. Such confict and emotion. Finally the golden trio together but wow. Well done. Again thank you for sharing this great story with us.