the Grey Cat
Ravenclaw!
James Potter did something unforgiveable and nobody knew about it... until now. What will the knowledge of this sin do to Severus and his perfectly (until now) isolated life?
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Alexis8907
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Drug use, Self-harm
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Aug 2007 / 04 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Aug 2007 / 04 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 13: 1 Samuel 16:7 | 25 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Great chapter! I'm glad he removed the spells and finally looks like he should. Hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: i'm glad about the removal of spells too. i'm also glad that he doesn't look like a carbon copy of severus now. that always kinda bugs me that harry rarely ever looks like a combination of two parents.
Snape and Harry story in which they discover a special connection between them. Takes place in the first year when Harry is 11. Some chapters will contain corporal punishment. Mentor/adoption fic.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Apr 2008 / 09 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Apr 2008 / 09 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Doubts | 01 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Another awesome chapter! Snape can't aviod talking with Harry forever. Keep up the excellent writing!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Glad that you enjoyed it. And nope he can't avoid it forever, but this is Snape. He'll put it off for as long as he can.
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Discussion of Duty and a Dismissal | 17 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Interesting story so far. Will you be elaborating on the connection in later chapters? I'm curious to how it was created in the first place. Great start so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I have some plans to eventually reveal how the link came about. It will be slowly hinted at throughout the story. Glad that you are enjoying things thus far. :)
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T | 23 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Poor Harry getting spanked like that! Excellent chapter and the ending makes me want to see what happens next so please write more soon!
Author's Response:
Well, poor Harry in one sense, but not so much in another. He's finding out he might be accountable to someone now. Someone that might care about him a little bit. But I'm going to hush now before I give away things from later chapters. :) So glad that you are enjoying the story and thank you very much for reading and reviewiing. More will be on the way soon.
Fox
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Discoveries | 10 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Interesting chapter! I loved Harry's comment about having skill in the beginning. This is great so far!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. :)
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers | 23 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Great chspter! I'm glad some parts of the bond were explained becuase I'd been wondering about that for a while now. Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. More and more will be explained throughout the course of the story because Harry will have plenty more questions and both of them will be dealing with many emotions.
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Holiday Plans | 13 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Very good chapter! I liked when McGonagall was scolding Snape and demanding him to sit down. Great chapter and hopefully more soon!
Author's Response: Yep, Minerva is one of the few that can keep Sev in line. And even though he hates being made to feel like a student himself again at times, Sev totally respects her and deep down cares about her, knowing that despite anything, she cares about him as well. I hope to have more soon if life will allow me to get my ideas typed up. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. :)
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Change of Plans | 21 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Good chapter! The Holiday's should be very interesting with Draco and Harry stuck together in Snape's rooms. Great work and hopefully more soon!
Author's Response: Will any of the trio survive the holidays, lol? It will be interesting for sure to see what happens and I'm not sure who to feel sorriest for - Snape, Harry, or Draco. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I do hope to have more posted fairly soon.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Three's a Crowd | 05 Dec 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Good chapter! I'm glad to see the two of them getting along somewhat okay. Great chapter and hopefully more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Glad that you liked the chapter. Yes, Harry and Draco will have to form a temporary truce of sorts it seems. And they can do it...the only question is WILL they? Hopefully more will be revealed in the next few chapters which I plan to work on this weekend.
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon | 22 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- I'm really glad you found time to update! Shame on those boys for fighting. Hopefully they've learned thier lesson. Good chapter and I hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review and I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. I think the boys are gradually learning. Maybe be the time the holidays are over they will be able to tolerate each other a bit more...maybe. Actually I'm still trying to get the next chapter finished and they are getting along more and it's proving to be as hard to write as them not getting along, lol. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)