the Grey Cat
Ravenclaw!
Harry gets some surprising news. He was adopted. His father is alive and he has a brother; named Severus Snape. Beta'd by breannatala
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaging
Categories: Big Brother Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Alexis8907
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Aug 2007 / 23 May 2007
Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Aug 2007 / 23 May 2007
Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 9: What is this Feeling? | 28 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Very nice prank on Snape! :)
| Title: Chapter 10: Sneaking, Slithering, Snapes | 28 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Thats very cool how they joined together to prank thier dad!
| Title: Chapter 11: Any Dream Will Do | 28 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Very nice twist with the deaging part!
| Title: Chapter 12: Boys Will Be Boys | 28 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Aww it's so cute seeing them interact together. Excellent chapter and I really look forward to reading about the camping trip. Please update again as soon as you can! :)
| Title: Chapter 13: Lesson Number One | 30 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- I hate endings like that... I'm sure Eileen will be rather confused to suddenly having to ten year old sons. Please dont tourture your readers with a long wait... :)
| Title: Chapter 15: A Whole New World | 07 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- I loved that ending scene! Serenity may not know all about Severus but neither does Eileen. I'm surprised that Serenity said that though becuase Eileen just showed her magic and for a muggle, that should have made Eileen a bit intimidating with her power. Excellent chapter and hopefully more soon!
| Title: Chapter 16: It Takes Two | 16 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Another absolutly excellent chapter! I love the pranks they played on Eileen too. :)
| Title: Chapter 17: In the Dark of the Night | 28 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Noooooooooooo! Not a cliffy! Pretty please with cherries on top and lots of whipped cream and whatever else you'd like on it update again soon!!
| Title: Chapter 18: There's Always a Rat | 06 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Excellent chapter! I think you did a good job on Voldemort although I'm surprised he didn't do anything to Harry yet. I imagine Harry's scar hurt with Voldie around as well. Peter owes Harry a life debt... will he help them at all?
| Title: Chapter 19: Good Morning Voldemort | 18 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Really good chapter! I like how they managed to sneak out through the secret passage that even Voldemort doesn't know about. The Imperio thing was surprising but it makes sense using that. Two weeks sounds soo long, but at least you didn't leave this with a cliffhanger. :)
Author's Response: I apologize for the wait, but with out a computer...(sigh). Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.