the Grey Cat
Ravenclaw!
Harry has finally had enough of his relatives' abuse and has locked himself in the chamber of secrets. To keep up appearances, Snape has been sent to take Harry's place for the summer.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Alexis8907
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 May 2008 / 13 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Wake up Call
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 May 2008 / 13 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Wake up Call
| Title: Chapter 5: Healings begin | 15 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Pretty good chapter. I would recommend either reading through your chapter before posting to find errors like- Quittadge. Or, it might be easier to get a beta reader to read through it for you. Other than that, this was a good chapter and I'm glad to see Remus is Harry's new godfather.
Author's Response: thank you for being so nice to me! and yes i will look over this chapet again and fix it.
| Title: Chapter 7: An Improved Life | 20 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Good ending! :)
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
When Severus adopted 6 year old Harry Potter, he vowed that Harry would never know the abuse he had suffered as a child. But what happens when Severus is attacked and falls into a coma and the Ministry decides to turn Harry over to his next of kin—Tobias Snape! Will Harry survive?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2008 / 14 Apr 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: Tobias Snape
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2008 / 14 Apr 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: Tobias Snape
| Title: Chapter 4: Boys Don't Cry | 16 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- All right... I've been sucked into reading another of your stories! I can't help it since they are really intersting! Poor Harry isn't having a good time with his grandpa. I bet Severus will be pissed when he wakes and I am really looking forward to that scene! This is really good so far and I look forward to reading more soon!
Author's Response: Oh God will he ever and there will be a huge fight then, believe me!
| Title: Chapter 5: Like Father Like Son | 17 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- That miserable old man! He is so terrible to Harry although I am really glad to see that he is questioning his own actions. Hopefully he doesn't give into the temptation of drinking anytime soon since that won't be a good outcome for Harry. Great chapter and I hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: he'll continue to question them as he realizes gradually that the way he treated Severus was very wrong.
| Title: Chapter 6: Two Steps Forward | 19 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- It's intersting to see Tobias being nice for a change. I wonder if Sev will ever forgive his father after he realizes the man can be nice. Excellent chapter as usual and also- Happy Birthday! :)
Author's Response: Sev may or may not forgive him, remember he has a lot of emotional trauma to work through since Tobias hurt him very badly.
| Title: Chapter 7: What Have You Done | 19 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Alright! A bonus chapter today! I'm glad to see that Severus is awake. Another great chapter too!
Author's Response: Me too and this one was very quick to write because Sev was screaming in my ear!
| Title: Chapter 8: Angry Dobermans and Accidental Magic | 20 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Well that was surprising. Good thing Harry's magic kicked in and saved him! :)
Author's Response: Yes and it may have even changed Tobias's mind a little about magic too!
| Title: Chapter 9: Never Again | 22 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- I knew something was going to happen! Paradise couldn't last forever. I can only hope Sev will let Harry have a supervised visit with his grandfather once and a while. Somehow I doubt little Harry will tolerate not visiting his grandpa. As uaual, this was an excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, something had to give eventually and I was planning on some supervised vsits eventually, once Severus gets over being mad at his dad, that is!
| Title: Chapter 10: Home At Last | 23 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Yup, I too felt like hugging Harry! He was so adorable in this chapter! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, he's a cutie! LOL!
| Title: Chapter 11: Outside Looking In | 24 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- The letter was perfect. I think Tobias really managed to at least make Sev think with that. Another excellent chapter too!
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it!