After mistakenly flooing himself to Snape's home the summer after Sirius' death, Harry realizes that his potions master can take matters into his own hands, literally. Warning: This story does involve the spanking of teenagers. If you have a problem with this, do not read and do not review. Any criticisms about CP will be ignored. But I love any other feedback!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Kashmiran
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Mar 2007 / 03 Feb 2006
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Mar 2007 / 03 Feb 2006
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey | 27 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
Great ending! Can't wait to start the sequel!
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Floo Me Away | 25 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
I'm liking this story and how it's written. I love the little bit of humor in the beginning of the second last paragraph. I hope to see a lot more of this humor in the rest of the story. Indeed very well written. Thank you for writing.
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Floo Me Away | 25 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
I'm liking this story and how it's written. I love the little bit of humor in the beginning of the second last paragraph. I hope to see a lot more of this humor in the rest of the story. Indeed very well written. Thank you for writing.
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Getting Warmer | 25 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
Harry seems to be way out of character... he id behaving oddly ungratful, arrogant and Malfoyish. Did you intend him to be OOC or does it have something to do with his fever that Snape is concerned about? I hope I'm not coming of as critiquing your work, I'm just trying to understand his behavior. I love your work, very nicely written.
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - You're on Fire | 25 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
If Harry keeps behaving the way he is, I wonder how Snape is going to get to know him. I hope it was the curse that was causing that behavior. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Great reading.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past | 26 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
I was hoping to see a bond forming between Harry and Snape by now. But they keeping running around in circles. I was really hoping that Snape would have acknowledged Harry's mistreatment at the Dursley but he disregarded the whole thing as if it was nothing. I'm looking forward to them bonding... really bonding and seeing each other as they are meant to be seen.
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Banter | 26 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
Finally some decent interaction between the two without them biting each other's heads off. I hope Harry can behave more in the future but very unlikely.... which I'm dreading. Hopefully Snape and Harry can come to an understanding and learn to respect each other.
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday | 26 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
OMG!!! I belive I was embarrassed for Harry when he got spanked in front of Neville. I felt as if I was standing there while he was getting spanked.
Harry should be in Hufflepuff as much as he cries. I thought he was going through a phase of grievance and everything was bottled up and needed to be released but c'mon Harry get a grip on yourself.
| Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco | 26 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
This is going to be quite interesting. Draco and Harry... Poor Snape. I have a strong feeling both wil get spanked out of their minds. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
| Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Two Boys | 26 Nov 2023 |
| Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) |
I like where this is going between Harry and Draco. Hopefully they will start being cordial towards one another if not friends. But I do want them to become friends. Loving the story. Great read!