Ravenclaw!
Sequel to A Time and Place to Grow - After spending a summer with Snape, Harry begins his sixth year at Hogwarts. But Snape is keeping an eye and a firm hand on him, and a new teacher, split loyalties and a looming fight with the Dark Lord await Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Administrator
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Reviews by Jade_Sullivan
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 May 2010 / 02 Apr 2007
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 May 2010 / 02 Apr 2007
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons | 18 Nov 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- I loved it. I knew he was going to get busted for lying. Poor Harry...having to wait for his spanking. I'm glad Snape came to his senses, though, and realized that Harry wouldn't be able to sleep thinking about the morning.
Harry's cheekiness really cracked me up in this chapter. Some particular favorites:
"You're so cruel."
and
"Right, then, I'm off. Thank you for your lovely hospitality, hairbrush excluded."
It's funny, because you'd expect him to be all humble and quiet and subdued after a punishment, but he's quite cheerful...probably because he isn't weighed down by guilt anymore.
Anyway, I love your characterization of Harry...OH!...and I also loved the part where Snape covered Harry with a blanket and noticed that he was shaking. I'm anxious to see where this story goes. Keep writing!...I'm loving these frequent updates of both of your stories :) Suppose that means I need to get crackin' on my own story...lol.
Thanks for the great update!
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Faking | 23 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- I loved this. The fake, weak cough Harry gave when Snape was glaring at him was hilarious. And I was actually proud of Snape and his growing patience with Harry... Sure, he yelled right back at him, but I think in a situation like this, it was exactly what Harry needed. It seemed to quiet him right down--being told that he acted like a seven-year-old sometimes, without regard for his safety. I do like how Harry told Snape that he actually thought this one through, though. I think it's important for Snape to acknowledge that, even if Harry's attempts don't always work out. At least he's trying...
You've really done a lovely job of building up the plot in this sequel. I can't wait for future chapters when Snape tries to actually teach Harry--should be interesting ;) Great job!
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Guilty | 05 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- I loved this chapter. I actually felt sorry for Draco in this chapter. True, Harry shouldn't have blurted that out about Draco's punishments, but I can understand why he did. And you did an excellent job conveying the distress between friends. I think you did write all three reactions very realistically. When your that age, keeping your friends happy is one of the most important things. And we all know how Ron can be...
Thanks for the great chapter. I'm glad you found time to update! I'm incredibly intrigued by the 'training room'. I have no idea what it's all about, so I can't wait to see what you've got in store for your next chapter. :)
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Sore | 16 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- I loved this chapter. Harry just pushes and pushes...like endlessly complaining about sore muscles. And then when Severus blasts him with cold water to 'relieve' the soreness, Harry complains some more. LOL. I love him.
I think Madame Moretta should have dealt with Harry's sleeping in her class before she went and told Snape. Should have made him stand or something. She seems to cause endless trouble for Harry; although, I found Severus's threat to have snapped Harry right out of his slump. A bit.
Their banter is always humorous. I loved it when Severus claimed he put in extra black herbs and made the potion extra thick just so Harry could taste it longer. A typical, parental joke that usually has a kid saying, "Yeah, I bet you did..."
I don't know what it is about your stories, but I just feel like I'm watching a movie. And the dialogue always sounds so natural. Your style is so unique, and I love getting notices that you've updated. Thanks for fitting writing into your busy schedule. I appreciate your talent, whenever it's delivered ;)
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Picnic | 17 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Positively loved this chapter. I still play 'Never have I ever..' sometimes. LOL.
I have a difficult time believing that Snape will let Harry off, even if he knows that Worty really did it. But then again, I think it will be interesting to see if Harry can even bring himself to lie to Snape after all they've been through. He's got to develop the respect sometime... I could see Harry stumbling around his lie and then giving himself up, inevitably begging Snape to go easy on Worty. I can't wait to see how this turns out. However you write it, it'll be brilliant and enjoyable.
As for the slash opinion, I vote no. This is one of the only stories where I can stomach Draco, and I think it has a lot to do with his and Harry's relationship--they're like brothers. Making it a slash fic would completely change it, and I think you'd lose a lot of readers, unfortunately.
Author's Response:
Thank you and everyone else who has weighed in one this matter. Most of the urges I got for slash were from fanfic.net, but to be honestly, Potions and Snitches was the first place I even posted my writing and I agree with everything you have said in this matter. Therefore, this story will remain Gen and I will have to tell the other people to read something else.
I appreciate the feedback and will start writing soon.
Perry
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Loyal | 27 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- There were several moments that really struck me...(no pun intended)...in this story. It was much more intense and meaningful than the previous chapters have been--it sort of felt like that "I will always love you" that you sprang on us readers at the end of ATAPTG. You know...that moment where we all got clogged up with tears. *shakes head* Darn it, Perry.
Anyway, Snape's intensity was the first things that affected me while reading. I knew that Harry was going to get spanked, and I was even pretty sure that he was going to give himself up and Worty would *still* get a spanking regardless. But I was not expecting Snape's emotional reaction, and that hit me really hard. You wrote him so well in this chapter.
My favorite moment was when Harry gave Worty a hug:
"Worty did not have to be told twice; he rushed towards Harry and wrapped his arms around the older boy as he sniffed, 'I'm sorry, Harry. Really, really sorry.'
Harry gave Snape an agonized look, and Snape nodded once. Harry immediately dropped his arms down to hug the little boy."
**the agonized look that Harry gave Snape was really heart wrenching, because it was a perfect description of Harry's character in a nutshell. He hates watching others suffer, and he'd rather take the blame than allow an eleven year old to be punished.
I think that he'll actually give in more quickly than he thinks he will in regard to the thirty he has coming. The guilt and anticipation will force him to really think about what he's done. Normally, I don't like it when adults make kids wait for their punishments, as it causes more problems than it cures. But in this case, it'll be good for Harry, because that's something he has a hard time doing: thinking before he plunges into something.
And finally, I loved Snape's blunt exclamation of his loyalty and devotion to Harry. It makes perfect sense for him to be so upset over Harry's lie and distrust, as in this story, it really *is* like he's failed.
Really terrific job on this chapter, Perry! And thank you for updating so quickly, especially when your allergies have flared up (I'm battling my own at the moment, as well).
Author's Response:
Ah, Jade, look what all you said about my little story. I was afraid you might this chapter too intense - I was wincing as I wrote it - but you seemed to enjoy along with other readers. I did feel like this story was getting a little too light-hearted and happy so bam! I slam you with angst.
Thanks for reading!
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Dizzy | 11 Apr 2009 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Glad to see you posting again, Perry. :-) Thanks for sharing this chapter with us.
First of all, it was really nice to read your style of writing again. You have a unique way of writing dialogue and actions, especially when it comes to male characters, and I totally enjoy being immersed into the Perry Universes ;-)
Snape, at first, frustrated me in this chapter. He's consistent in the way he handles Harry, yet he isn't at the same time. He shouldn't threaten Harry to make him study well, but I don't think that you, as an author, necessarily agree with his actions. I can, however, see Snape making that threat and then not following through. Snape isn't a perfect parent, and he is going to make stupid decisions. The ideal option would be for Snape to somehow encourage Harry to get perfect marks by giving him an incentive...like earning something Quidditch-ish. But perhaps Snape will realize that later. And even if he doesn't, hey, he's Snape. He's the authority and he wants Harry to know that.
Secondly, if Harry decides to sneak out, I think it'll make his earlier punishments meaningless. He'll have learned nothing. And Snape's use of spanking as a punishment is worthless. All it means is that Harry considers having a sore butt for a day acceptable consequences for a bit of fun. A lot of kids think like that. On the other hand, I can see him going through with it and feeling guilty--maybe even turning himself in or coming back on his own accord. There comes a time when Harry has to learn how to make smart decisions on his own. And at this point, he still acts childish (even though I smiled all the way through reading the scene where Harry was dodging Snape and Snape was chasing Harry all around the room).
That said, I think this is the defining moment of the series. If Harry disobeys at this point, then he has learned nothing, and that's very disappointing. But if he does obey, or at least deeply regret his actions, then he and Snape have made progress. Harry's only 16 and he'll make mistakes, but I really hope he uses his head this time.
Again, it was wonderful to read another chapter to this story. I've really missed your writing. Keep at it as often as you can :-) I hope real life isn't kicking your arse like it was a few months ago.
It is, isn't it... LOL.
~Jade
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When Harry finds an injured Snape on his doorstep and must hide him from the Dursleys, he has no idea that this very, very bad day will be the start of something good.
Harry and Snape are thrown together by annoying relatives, a series of strange dreams, and Voldemort's latest hunt for Harry, but their greatest challenge may well be surviving each other. This will be a long summer unless the two can find a way to work together. A slow-burn enemy-to-mentor story.
Alternate 6th summer (and part of the school year): post-OotP; ignores HBP and DH.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Harry and Snape are thrown together by annoying relatives, a series of strange dreams, and Voldemort's latest hunt for Harry, but their greatest challenge may well be surviving each other. This will be a long summer unless the two can find a way to work together. A slow-burn enemy-to-mentor story.
Alternate 6th summer (and part of the school year): post-OotP; ignores HBP and DH.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 61 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2021 / 30 Apr 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
Chapters: 61 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2021 / 30 Apr 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads | 31 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Alright, so I just read all 12 chapters in one sitting and am in love with your story. You're an excellent writer, and I think you've characterized Snape and harry perfectly. Well done! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It is so fun to hear someone tell me that they not only discovered and liked my story, but read it straight through! Thank you for making my day! I hope you continue to follow the story!
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy | 06 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Man, Snape is ruthless...lol. Although, to be honest, I wouldn't expect him to be any other way. I like how you've kept Snape in character. Sometimes I read fics where Snape is way too coddling, way too soon, and it makes me a bit ill, really.
Plus, I think you've made it clear that Harry really doesn't like people feeling sorry for him or treating him like a child, and Snape doesn't do either. I'm anxious, though, to see how Snape and Harry get along for the rest of the summer. It seems like Snape really understands Harry even if he's reluctant to admit it.
I'm enjoying this story so much! You have a real talent for writing realistic dialogue. The exchange between Hermione, Ron, and Harry was spot-on. I loved it.
Oh, and I really liked how you ended this chapter. It's nice to see Harry smile once and a while...he's such an angsty kid. lol.
And one more thing...since I read this story straight through a week or two ago, I meant to comment about the early chapters, but forgot when I kind of lumped my review into one at the end of the last chapter. ANYWAY...I appreciate how you made the abuse Harry suffered from his uncle believable and not over-done. I've read fics where Harry is absolutely pummled by Uncle Vernon and left for death. I guess I'm just saying that this fic is awfully believable and I love it!!
That said, I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Hehe, I totally know what you mean with getting ill! I think it's the amount of fics I've read that have annoyed me with a too-nice-too-fast-Snape that made me want to take his development so slow in my own fic...
Thanks so much for the complimentary review! I love to read what you & others like (or don't) about this fic! I'm so glad you're liking my writing style and that you think it realistic! Thanks!!!
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Occlumency Tutor Wanted | 13 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Wow...what an awesome chapter!!! Your characterization of Snape is so perfect. Of course the only time he'd ever call Harry by his first name is when he's basically incoherent. lol. I really liked the dream sequence though. The descriptions of the cold basement made me feel like I was suffocating. Also, I think it was brilliant of you to show Snape's sympathetic and concerned side emerge when Harry was sobbing (because let's face it...the boy never cries). It seemed like it really freaked Snape out to see him in such a state.
But that said, I really think the brilliancy of this story lies within your ability to keep Snape in character. I'm just really, really loving this story!
Author's Response:
Perfect? *blush* Can't get a much better compliment than that! :) I love that you love my Snape - he really is fun to write, so I always cross my fingers that he's fun to read as well. Thanks for the review!