Ravenclaw!
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Snape and Harry story in which they discover a special connection between them. Takes place in the first year when Harry is 11. Some chapters will contain corporal punishment. Mentor/adoption fic.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Administrator
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Reviews by Jade_Sullivan
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Apr 2008 / 09 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Apr 2008 / 09 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Discoveries | 11 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Lovely chapter :) Snape is SO in denial! LOL. And, yes!...Harry is beginning to stick up for Snape. I was very glad when I read that.
Will there be more Snape/Draco interaction in later chapters? I wonder if Draco and Harry will ever discover or discuss the mutual concern Snape has for them. Ah, well..guess I'll just have to wait for the updates ;)
Wonderful job! Can't wait for more.
~Jade
Author's Response:
Hi Jade,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you are enjoying it. Oh yes, Snape is very much in denial, lol. But eventually the hard head will soften up a bit.
Snape/Draco huh? *grins* Of course there wil be more later. I would never leave my little dragon out of things for too long (mainly because he would pitch a fit, but oh well). The boys will have some opportunities to interact with each other and with Snape. Beyond that I'm not saying. Yep, have to wait on the updates. :D
Thanks again for your kind feedback.
Fox
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers | 22 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Lovely, lovely chapter, Fox. Poor Harry. He really can be impossible at times, but I felt so sorry for him when he was sobbing down by the lake. And I'm really glad that Snape symphatized with Harry enough not to just haul off and smack him when he was being disrespectful. And I love how you've shown Harry's confusion over the situation by characterizing him as a boy who seems to be struggling a bit between giving in to Snape's kindness and concern and running away from it. Snape is exactly the same way.
Again, great chapter. You're a very talented writer :)
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so very much, Jade. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. And yes, both Harry and Snape are rather torn about how they want to handle things, with part of them wanting to give in and have the comfort and love that neither of them has ever truly experienced before, while another part of them is fighting against it. Wonder what it will take to finally get them to a point of true understanding of each other? Stay tuned for future chapters to find out. :)
Thanks again for reading and giving such lovely feedback.
Fox
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers | 09 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- UPDATE!! Pretty please?
Author's Response:
lol, hi, Jade. I am working on it, I promise. Life and the plot bunnies are both being a bit unhelpful. As soon as I get an idea, life gets in the way. Then when I have a moment, the bunnies are sulking from being ignored and don't want to play. But I will not abandon the story and an update will be posted as soon as I can. Thanks for wanting to read more. :)
Fox
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Holiday Plans | 12 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- I saw you had updated on ff.net and was so glad because I love this story! :) I also love how McGonagall is one of the only people who can make Snape feel ashamed. lol. I can't wait to see how things turn out for Snape and Harry over Christmas break. Will Draco end up staying as well? I hope Snape speaks to him about inclination to taunt...
Anyway, great chapter! I'm looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Hi Jade, thanks for the lovely review. I love writing Sev and Minerva, or as it turns out in most cases, letting them wirte it themselves, lol. Those two have a mind of their own when it comes to interacting. As for Draco *looks at Jade and wonders if she is a spy* sshhh...not going to say yet. Let's just say the holidays are going to be interesting, but fun. I can't wait to get the next few chapters all typed up.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)
Fox
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Change of Plans | 21 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Loved it! I've been waiting so long for an update; I'm so glad you found the time to do it :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jade! Glad that you liked it and I really hope to have another chapter done fairly soon. Meanwhile...I see that you have been busy with your own story. Must go read now. :) And therein lies the problem...do I read or do I write? Decisions, decisions. Either way, thank you again for the review. :)
An AU set in Harry's fifth year at Hogwarts. What happens when Harry and Ron get tired of studying and look for a way around it? Chaos ensues of course. And who will ultimately bear the brunt of things? Why none other than our favorite Potions Master. Just what he will do with his new responsibility is anyone's guess however. A Harry de-aged fic because I, unlike some people, can not resist a pair of soulful green eyes which is exactly what this little plot bunny had.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2008 / 24 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2008 / 24 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Settling In | 22 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- This story is so cute. And you know my feelings about Draco...haha. I LOVE him. I love the relationship between Draco and Snape, very much like the one you've created in Connections, which by the way, will that one be updated soon as well? I'm simply addicted. lol.
Anyway, lovely story! Great job :)
Author's Response:
Jade,
Thank you, thank you! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :) And yep, I knew you were a fellow Draco lover! :D I absolutely adore Sev and Harry is a cutie, but I have to have my little Dragon in there somewhere too, lol.
As for Connections...funny you should mention that. I was just about to update it as well. So not much longer to wait!
Fox *who is off to feed Jade's addition :D *
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Potions, Punishments, and Presents | 10 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- I'm really enjoying this story. I have to admit that some babyfics that I have read in the past tend to annoy me because of the excessive baby talk...lol. But your story doesn't at all. It's adorable, and I absolutely loved the scene where Snape was stroking Harry's hair unknowingly.
Great job with this chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Jade. And I can totally understand where you're coming from with the baby talk issue. A little goes a long way to me. Perhaps it's just me and having worked with daycare and kindergarten kids for years, but I abhor too much sugar sweet lisping and such from a four or five year old. Kids don't really speak like that all the time, especially a little boy as smart as our Harry. :D As for Snape and his unconcious caring gestures...well, he's starting to melt more than he thinks.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.
Fox
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Out and About | 07 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- That. Was Adorable. I'm so glad you updated! I've missed your stories :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad that you enjoyed it. :) And aww, my writing was missed. Hopefully I'll have more chapters posted soon for one or the other of my stories.
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Wizards in Winter | 23 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- This was an adorable chapter! I really enjoy this story. It's definitely one of the more exceptional de-aging stories.
I'm not sure if I have ever mentioned this, but I also love the way you write Draco. He's very sweet in this fic, as well as Connections. I sympathize with him and have grown to adore the relationship between Severus and Draco. And, of course, with a toddler-sized Harry thrown in the mix, it's all very endearing. Such a warm story. I love it!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks so much, Jade. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and like the story as a whole. I'm having fun with it.
And it looks as though my plan is working, hehe. More people are seeing that Draco CAN be a sweet guy! *loves my Dragon just as much as my other two boys* I think he's more of a sweetie in Second Chance than in Connections, but I do try to bring out the fact that he does have a good side in both stories. I have always thought he could be a great kid with the right person to help him along (the right person being Sev of course :D ).
Thanks again for reading and reviewing. It's very much appreciated. :)
Fox
Life as a double agent begins to take its toll on Snape. Can Harry really trust his most hated professor?
Takes Place: 6th summer, 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer, 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Suicide Themes
Chapters: 16 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Jul 2003 / 19 Dec 2003
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 16 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Jul 2003 / 19 Dec 2003
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 21 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- This story is extremely original, and I love it! I was not expecting Snape to be sitting in his room with a bottle of whiskey by the end of this chapter. I sympathize with him loads in this story, and I like how you've given him some depth as a character. Can't wait for more!