Ravenclaw!
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Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirement by Dumbledore. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? In response to the 72-Hour Challenge.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Membership status: Administrator
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Reviews by Jade_Sullivan
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 13 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Oh, and I loved the OotP movie! Even though the Occlumency scenes weren't as in depth as the book, I thought that this was the first accurate portrayal of Snape/Harry that I've ever seen in a movie...and the "I may vomit.." part really made me laugh.
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 19 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Pure brilliancy. This is one of my absolute favorite stories. Snape seems to be softening a tad, am I wrong? ;)
Author's Response: Why thank you! As for Snape...well, wait and see.
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 27 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Excellent chapter! I think it's extremely clever how you had Snape dump his veritaserum down the sink. Actually, I think it was better for him to be conscious during Harry's interrogation. That whole scene made my heart ache...especially when Harry asked Snape about his worst memory with the Dursleys.
I think you're a brilliant writer, and I hope you continue to produce stories like this. Honestly. Keep it up.
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 03 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- I actually reread this entire story yesterday, and was wishing for an update soon. I am SO glad you did! lol. This is one of the only stories I've read that keeps Snape and Harry in character so well. The plot is brilliant, and I love what you've done with the brief messages sent by Dumbledore. This story is amazing. I suppose a rereading of this chapter will have to do for now, but just know I am DYING for an update. lol :)
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 16 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Brilliant chapter!...especially the Occlumency scene and the last several lines. I'm hooked on this story. Please update again soon :)
One more thing: was the shift in tense (from past to present) done on purpose? Just wondering since all the other chapters are written in past tense...
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 | 31 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Is this really your first attempt at writing fanfic, besides your oneshot? Honestly, it's some of the best fic I've ever read! You have an amazing writing style and pay close attention to details.
I especially loved the Goldilocks/Oliver Twist exchange... That was hilarious. Each chapter is consistently brilliant. Oh, and the tense shift to present doesn't bother me; it just kind of threw me off for a second in the last chapter ;)
I just love this story! The minute I finish a new chapter, I immediately go back and read it again. lol. That's how good it is.
Author's Response: It is my first attempt. I'm flattered by your praise!
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 05 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Oh, God...how heartbreaking for Harry. This was a brilliant chapter. Thanks for the quick update :) I can't wait for the next one!
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 19 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Wow...what a chapter! And no, I didn't see that coming. I never thought Snape would have cracked first knowing Harry's tendency to become temporarily psychotic...lol.
I loved the vision Harry used to calm Snape down. The imagery was fantastic.
Also, the bit about the wand cores was brilliant. How did you think of that? I never would have thought to juxtapose thestrals and phoenixes. Great job with that.
I'm still trying to figure out if Snape and Harry possess (and will continute to possess) more of a friend/mentor relationship or if it will blossom into something more...guardian-like. Either way, I'm enjoying the ambiguity of it.
You're doing an awesome job with such an original story. I love it. Your story definitely deserves to be featured. It's brilliant.
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 27 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- This is beyond brilliant. I don't know how you do it. You have such a talent for building suspense... I'm actually rather speechless right now. Just know that this chapter was amazing, and as much as you can't wait to start writing the next chapters, I'm DYING to read them :)
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 04 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Can we just talk about how incredibly brilliant this fic is? Every chapter is so consistently well-written. And I've said it before, but I'm still in awe of the fact that this is your first fic.
This chapter was brilliant. Harry finally had a breakdown. I've been waiting for it. lol.
The way you described James' and Lily's deaths was heart-breaking. The details were chilling, but really seemed to bring it all into perspective for Harry...made it more realisic.
I am SO dying to see what happens next. I'm ready to scratch Dumbledore's eyes out! Okay, maybe that's a little harsh, but wow...he's infuriating. lol. Update soon :)