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Reviews by Foolish Wishmaker
At the welcoming feast Poppy notices that eleven-year-old Harry is wearing glamours, Severus looks after Harry during the first year, and together they decide to go on a time travel – will they be able to change something? AU, partly OOC.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Time Travel Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 02 Sep 2007 Series: None - Challenges: None
A couple of typos: "So why could a child" (would, not could) "and when you loose points" (lose, not loose) Author's Response: Thanks for the corrections - English is really difficult! Severitus challenge response. On Harry's 15th birthday, a surprising truth is revealed. Now he and Snape must deal with its consequences.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Sep 2007 / 03 Sep 2007 Series: None - Challenges: None
In all seriousness, this truly is a great start, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, when hopefully more will be revealed and explained. I wonder why there was no letter for Sirius (as she couldn't have known whether he would still be around or not), seeing how he is perhaps the most likely to need to be reminded not to do anything rash.
I guess Harry better have all the fun he can, now, because it's about to end! Poor thing, so clueless about what's coming. Excellent chapter.
Soon after rescuing 7-year-old Harry from the abusive Dursleys, Severus Snape starts his teaching career at Hogwarts. Harry finds even more ways to surprise his father, the Headmaster, and a school full of students. Snape'll have his hands full, raising and protecting his son.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Oct 2008 / 08 Sep 2007 Series: A Boy Called Whelp - Challenges: None
I wonder what it'll be like for Harry to be at the castle with so many students. I doubt ALL of them will like him. I'm really glad you decided to continue Whelp, which was so excellent. AU Book I. Instead of there being a Harry Potter, there is an Arielle Potter, the girl-who-lived. Her life was totally changed when instead of Hagrid being the one that came for her to that hut on the rock, it was Severus Snape. The storyline is not what you expect. Arielle actually has a personality of her own. XD
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Girl!Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Jul 2008 / 10 Dec 2007 Series: Arielle Potter - Challenges: None
A drabble (a fic that is 100 words). Snape suspects a terrible fate.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jan 2008 / 09 Jan 2008 Series: None - Challenges: None
Poor Snape though. You KNOW he would just hate something like that. I wonder how he'll get back at that evil Potter brat...! Author's Response: Hmm, someone else could write that drabble. That sounds interesting…a round robin drabble. Glad you liked it! Harry's life is turned around and upside down when a late night visitor from the future tells him the unthinkable. Now he must convince Snape to teach him Occlumency, get along with Draco Malfoy and survive through what Voldemort has planned for him.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Jan 2009 / 09 Jan 2008 Series: None - Challenges: None
I definitely want more of this story. You have a great start here. Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I'm really glad that you find it interesting! Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I'm really glad that you find it interesting!
I see absolutely nothing wrong with your story or plot so far. You are NOT torturing Harry. This is a very tame fic of its type (Harry dealing with his destiny, etc.), in terms of angst and emotional torture. There is frustration, yes, but he is not being tormented by the tasks set to him. In fact, so far he is practically blithely sailing along. He isn't spending sleepless nights being tormented by horror shows of what will happen if he fails. And he hasn't given up; he still thinks it's possible to change the future... in fact he is determined to change it. I don't see how that's Harry-torture at all. Okay, so he's been set some hard tasks. Yes. Well, what about canon? Seemed pretty heavy stuff to me. Harry's always facing impossible odds, so that is nothing to whine about. Besides, how fun would a story be if his future self's only advice was "Eat more carrots. Harry, it'll help your eyesight. By the time you're my age you'll hardly need glasses at all."? His future self would hardly have come to warn him if the situation was not dire. Anyhow, you have a fine plot and don't let people dictate what you write. The only criticism you should take to heart is spelling/grammar, because that is something you have control over. Whether readers like or agree with your chosen plot is not in your control. How often you update is also not in your control, since real life should be a higher priority. Don't worry about losing readers -- they have a right to dislike your story and leave. Just as many will like it and stay. Take care. Author's Response: This review was very inspiring and uplifting Fw, thank you for taking the time to write it! I get really fed up with some people. I almost want to scream, "It's my story and I'll torture him all I want and there's nothing you can do about it!!" But that probably would not be receved really well, lol. It is supposed to be an angst fic, his future life is SO bad that he risks it all to come back and change it. That's not somthing small. I'm very happy that you seem to know where I'm coming from and that you don't think I'm a 'Harry torturer', lol. Thank you Fw, :) Scorpia A near tragedy and a shocking discovery lead two bitter enemies to much soul searching and eventual acceptance of each other. Much angst along the way though. Some Ginny and Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Aug 2010 / 14 Jan 2008 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Teenager...boy...these things are often not synonymous with thinking. It's not just HArry.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. ~Lesley~ |
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