Slytherin!
This is my attempt at a challenge. The 'Potions and Snitches' challenge posted by Jan AQ. Need opinions on this one. Would anybody like to appear in this story? Yes, if you so wish you may be in the story!
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by DaughterOfAres
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Sep 2007 / 31 Aug 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Potions and Snitches
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Sep 2007 / 31 Aug 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Potions and Snitches
| Title: Chapter 1: In the Beginning. | 31 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Cute! I'm not exactly sure what kind of character names or details you would like, though. Prehaps using some the names of the authors that frequent the shout-box would help? Other then that I don't know. Feel free to use me in it. Anyway, this looks like its going to be another good story and I'm eagerly awaiting an update to this story as well.
P.S. I just deleted the first review I gave for this story, because I forgot to add something. Just letting you know so that you don't think something strange is going on with your reviews.
Author's Response:
I thought that since this is a fic based on the site that it would be nice to have a number of names from the site appearing in the story. ^-^ Details are basically: Name, age (what you want to be in the story, not neccessarily your actual details) House, species, chatacter/personality, habits (eats sweets a lot, twitch, walk aroun in animagious form), and favourite characters.
I hope that this fic works out, I'm making it up as a go along based on the reviews I get. Should be fun though. ^-^ Thanks for reviewing chuckyhun. xXx
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Save Me! | 06 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- LOL. the idea of Snape hanging upside down covered in paint...swinging...LOL. I loved it. can't wait till the next post.
Author's Response: Thank thee kindly DoA! ^-^ Can't tell you how reasuring it is to see a familiar name in my reviews box, so thank you. XxX
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After Harry is caught for exploding a cauldron in 2nd year Potions, Snape insists he keep a firm hand on the boy he must secretly protect. However, he discoveres that there is more to the twelve year old than unruliness and disrespect. Similarly, Harry learns from and gains a new perspective of his professor.
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Jun 2008 / 25 Sep 2007
Series: Emerald Eyes - Challenges: None
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Jun 2008 / 25 Sep 2007
Series: Emerald Eyes - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 25 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- I love it. I allready told you that though and everything I really liked about this fic so I won't repeat it. Though I would like to see it continued. :)
Really glad you posted it and I hope you get tons of reviews.
Author's Response: Continuing it might be fun. Thanks again for previewing before I posted. I'm glad you liked it :)
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 30 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Yay! you continued it. *considers doing happy dance, but it would ruin her image* Anyway, really glad you continued and I can't wait till the next installment.
Author's Response:
Yep, I did. Strangely, this chapter was easier to write than the second chapter of my other story...but they're both fun...and different. Thanks for the review! And by all means, happy dance away...I won't tell. lol.
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 03 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- I loved it. Simply said: It was fantastic. You portray Harry's feeling beautifully. And when Snape didn't say anything about the vial...I loved it. Write more as soon as you can please.
Author's Response:
*blushes* Wow, thank you for such a wonderful review! Harry is a character that I've always been able to relate to really well, home-life aside, and I love writing emotion realstically.
The fact that Snape said nothing about the vials is going to matter a great deal in their growing relationship.
I'm flattered that you're enjoying my story, and I promise that I will write the next chapter as soon as I can :)
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 14 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Awesome, as always, can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear you're still reading :)
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 20 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Love it. Absolutly, postively, love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm always amazed, every time I read your story, how well you write Harry. You seem to get into his head amazingly well. Its wonderful. I love it. I think I mentioned that already though.
Anyway, great chapter and please update again soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really appreciate all of your kind reviews. I think I've said it before, but I really have always felt connected with Harry. And I'm so flattered that you think that I write him well.
I will have a new chapter out as soon as I can. Maybe I'll work on this story first. I didn't realize I left it at a bit of a cliffie state...lol.
Thanks again!
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 22 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Awww...sick Harry is so cute. Good chapter and I'm glad we, your loyal reviewers, were able to inspire you to write more.
Will Harry be better by tomorrow's detention or will he be to sick to move when he wakes up in the morning? I can see Snape being concerned/annoyed when he doesn't see him the whole day then finding out he's in the Hospital Wing.
Good chapter, as always, and please update again soon.
Author's Response:
Yes, you truly did; however, I had started the chapter on Saturday night and just decided to go ahead and finish it last night and post it :)
A lot of Harry's "under the weather" status was due to his lack of sleep. It kind of triggered it. I think Harry's smart enough to do what he's told and go to bed ;)
Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 03 Nov 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- I think I already reviewed this chapter, but since you had to upload it again I'll review again :) Though in all honest I can't remember what was in the last review.
Good chapter, as usual. I think I say this every time, but I simiply love your Harry and how well you write him. I tend to avoid Harry-point-of-view in my story, because I can't seem to write him properly. Your's is awesome of course. I liked the conversation with Dumbldore though I'm incredibly exhausted right now and can't remember why. But it was good.
Anyway, great chapter and please update soon.
Author's Response:
lol...sorry about your exhaustion. Thanks for reviewing again! I'm not really sure where I get my inspiration for writing Harry. Sometimes I base it off of myself as a teenager (I know I'm a girl, but still...). And again, I just try to make it realistic.
Thanks again for sticking with the story :)
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 04 Nov 2007 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- To answer your question, I prefer longer chapters with more plot. However its not really about what I or anyone else thinks. Its your personal preferance. To quote George Orwell regaurding the rules of writing "...Rule 10: ignore all the rules in order not to say something completly idotic..." (actually that was more of a paraphrase I can't recall the exact words right now).
I really enjoyed this chapter, especially Harry temper tantrum at the end, it was so realistic and so cute! I'm eagerly looking foward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing :) And yay!...high five for realism. lol. I suppose I was just noticing a pattern with the whole chapter thing, and was just curious. Anyway, so glad you enjoyed the chapter.